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for, fore, four

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for, fore, four

He waits and listens, for the word  ”Fore”
Steals the balls as they land One two three four
Now he can juggle, that’s what he wanted them for
The little four striped grass mouse, what a metaphor!

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  1. Date: 11/30/2012 11:59:00 AM

    Sorry so late but I am here now to say congratulations on your win in this contest Seren. Love, Carol

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/30/2012 2:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You playing catch up Carol. No problem a comment is received smilingly no matter how much delay....Seren
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:00:00 PM

    Seren, congratulations with your win in Debbie's contest~ PD

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/23/2012 6:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you P.D. ................Seren
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 8:47:00 AM

    I told you that she would love it! : ) Congratulations! Ruben.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/23/2012 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes thanks Ruben you were right ...Seren
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:39:00 AM

    lovely poem my friend Seren. I like it. congratulations on your win :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/23/2012 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Maria ....Seren
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:29:00 AM

    Lovely take on the theme Seren - love the image of the juggler. Congrats on your win!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/23/2012 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Vicky ...Seren
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 3:21:00 AM

    Big congrats girl nice to see you again getting a winning place xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/23/2012 3:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Mandy, didnt we do well....Seren
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 5:42:00 PM

    So cute! Deborah will love it! Very nice. Ruben.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/16/2012 6:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Ruben ...Seren
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 9:15:00 AM

    Ha ha ha....., wonderful metaphor enjoyed. Loved always, bl

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/14/2012 11:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks bl
  1. Date: 11/10/2012 8:16:00 AM

    Such a cute little poem.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/10/2012 9:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joann, when they ask me for something other than rhyme its a hit and miss for me. As I havent a clue.... Thanks for your comment....Seren