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WHEN

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO LEAVE ME?
I KNOW IT WONT BE LONG
I KNOW THAT YOU KEEPING TALKING ABOUT IT
WHEN I ASK YOU SAY IM WRONG

I LISTEN TO YOUR PHONE CALLS
TO YOUR FAMILY BACK HOME
I HEAR THE WORDS I DREAD TO HEAR
IT WONT BE LONG YOU.LL LEAVE ME 
ALL ALONE

THE LAST FEW YEARS WHEN YOU,VE COME BACK HOME 
AFTER TWO WEKS YOU LEFT ME ALONE
EACH TIME THAT YOU COME BACK 
A PIECE OF YOU IS GONE

I DONT KNOW WHAT YOU DO THERE 
AS I SET HERE WITHOUT A WORD
I KNOW THAT I GET LONESOME
AND WITHOUT YOU ALL IFEEL IS HURT
IT SEEMS THAT WHEN YOU THERE YOU NEVER GIVE ME ONE THOUGHT
AND YOU,LL DO ME BAD BECAUSE YOU CAN BECAUSE YOU.LL NEVER BE CAUGHT

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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:46:00 AM
    Oh .... so sad Debbie .... but it is written in a good way. - Wishing you all the best. - Have a nice weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:18:00 PM
    Debbie, deep thoughts, thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) PD