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haiku 365


The noon sun blinds
yet not a single eye blinks
on the peacock’s tail








*For Charle's contest

**Please click on the about this poem link for a photo I took at the park which inspired this haiku. Our local park has a nice zoo.

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Cyndi. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:38:00 AM

    wow, this is AWESOME. One of my favorites on the list, Cyndi. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 5:47:00 AM

    Big congratulations on your win Cyndi love, big hugs xx

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:15:00 PM

    Cyndi, , congratulations with your haiku win,,, take care..pd

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 1:34:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the haiku 101 contest, Cyndi. Love, Su

    Crous Avatar Suzette Crous Date: 11/23/2012 1:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PS I would have left the "yet" out (but that is a personal taste). I love the image of the eye on the peacock's tail.... very inventive :-)
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:10:00 PM

    only 2 questions ;) ;) oopsie 3? #1why [T], #2 why not show -- [because you don't & because you use [yet] in the 2 and [on] in line 3 thus connecting ALL parts gramatically you wrote it so either line 1 or 3 COULD be the fragment..you are a very tricky Dee The reader could get whiplash from flinging his brain around it LOL LIGHT & Love

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:36:00 AM

    Dear Cyndi - This is inventive and I see the Peacock tail staring me down. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:25:00 PM

    good luck...pd

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 6:46:00 PM

    very nice haiku, Cyndi. lovely. hugs, Catie :)