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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Cyndi. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:38:00 AM
    wow, this is AWESOME. One of my favorites on the list, Cyndi. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 5:47:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your win Cyndi love, big hugs xx

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:15:00 PM
    Cyndi, , congratulations with your haiku win,,, take care..pd

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 1:34:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the haiku 101 contest, Cyndi. Love, Su

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    Date: 11/23/2012 1:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    PS I would have left the "yet" out (but that is a personal taste). I love the image of the eye on the peacock's tail.... very inventive :-)
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:10:00 PM
    only 2 questions ;) ;) oopsie 3? #1why [T], #2 why not show -- [because you don't & because you use [yet] in the 2 and [on] in line 3 thus connecting ALL parts gramatically you wrote it so either line 1 or 3 COULD be the fragment..you are a very tricky Dee The reader could get whiplash from flinging his brain around it LOL LIGHT & Love

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:36:00 AM
    Dear Cyndi - This is inventive and I see the Peacock tail staring me down. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:25:00 PM
    good luck...pd

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 6:46:00 PM
    very nice haiku, Cyndi. lovely. hugs, Catie :)