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Haiku 202

white winter cover
pine tree limbs cry
blizzard possible

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  1. Date: 3/29/2013 6:35:00 AM

    great, simply cold and great :) keep up the good work

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:19:00 AM

    This made me cold !! brrrr

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 8:34:00 PM

    Yes, it is here and we must bear the length of time it takes to get rid of it. Pine trees aren't the only ones to be sad. :) Lizzy

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 9:50:00 AM

    An excellent haiku my dearest friend, Carol! I extremely love it although with an image which foretells sadness. How I wish you'll come back. I'm missing you here on soup. Please come back even if you don't comment on my poems as long as i see you here and I promise to visit you always. love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 10:28:00 AM

    I loved this poem Carol. I am just learning to write other forms and I was most impressed with this haiku. It describes just how winter affects everything in your cold times with regard to nature. Pam x

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 5:01:00 PM

    I really want it to snow in london, Carol

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 8:57:00 PM

    Hi Carol, i see I stopped on this poem alot... :-).... you see I do wuv~ you... about the haiku...love the haiku ,, i do feel bad for the tree...xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 11:18:00 AM

    Wishing you a happy new year and hoping to see more new poems of yours soon.

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:28:00 PM

    Carol , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. pd

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 6:20:00 AM

    short and sweet! on soup after a long long time, happy new year!

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 1:32:00 PM

    Very nice Carol.Wish you a very very Happy New Year.

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 1:18:00 PM

    Carol, a lovely but, cold haiku...love it...pd

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 9:18:00 PM

    Love it ;}

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 11:35:00 PM

    Loooove the middle line, great haiku Carol!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Lovely haiku! Cynthia

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:52:00 PM

    Amazing imaginary .jk

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:26:00 PM

    Yes I know this one all to well. I can see those trees crying here at the moment. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:13:00 PM

    so visual, love this

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 11:08:00 AM

    Excellent haiku imaged beautifully. Thanks, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:47:00 AM

    Beautiful imagery here Carol!Very nice haiku.Thanks for your all congratulatory messages.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:36:00 PM

    Ummm sounds cold. Great visual. Warm wishes, Connie

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:32:00 PM

    Well-thought out piece. Enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:17:00 PM

    Carol, this is a lovely haiku, reminds me so much of my own weather today in Canada. Constance

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:09:00 AM

    Well done. I feel cold already.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 5:49:00 PM

    This Haiku is a beautiful picturization of winter snow -captivating. Thanks for your message of congratulationson my Haiku Buried Heart. Carol, I am indebted to you for your kindness. Have a nice day. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:03:00 AM

    Beautiful winter haiku Carol, thank you for your lovely, uplifting comments and congrats, they are encourage me more :) -hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 10:03:00 AM

    This is nice, Winter can be pretty bad. I have been in blizzards before. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:31:00 PM

    Nice poem, Carol, though it does remind me too much of the upcoming winter... brrr... Terry

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 8:33:00 AM

    this is beautiful carol, thank you for your greetings and comments in my pages, I appreciate them a lot :D- Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 4:59:00 AM

    Nice haiku Carol. Always a pleasure reading your work dear. Many thanks for your lovely congratulatory notes at my pages, you inspire us all much. I'd been away from soup most of this month, was off on vacation post the festive season here.

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