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About This Poem

Haiku 201

flowing water


beneath dark shadow mist


phantom tide

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  1. Veetil Avatar
    Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/31/2013 8:57:00 AM
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    Once more here to read this haiku ........Stopping by to say hi... Best wishes ®ards , Mehnaz...
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/11/2013 8:58:00 PM
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    ooo,can be a deep ... i like the ghostly ride.... ..xox~LINDA
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    Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 12/9/2012 3:24:00 PM
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    A great haiku Carol. love phyl
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    kash poet
    Date: 12/9/2012 2:48:00 AM
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    Another great haiku!Love this.
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    HOLLY MOORE
    Date: 12/7/2012 10:37:00 AM
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    Very nice...I've read it before, but I wanted to read it again...Thanks for your comments...Hugs, Holly Moore
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/5/2012 4:30:00 PM
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    just stopping by to say HI. HOpe you are doing great.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 12/5/2012 7:43:00 AM
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    Great ghostly Haiku that you have written today..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for the congrats..Sara
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    HOLLY MOORE
    Date: 12/4/2012 6:56:00 PM
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    That's a very beautiful image!..thanks for your comments..xxoo Holly
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    Erich Goller
    Date: 12/3/2012 11:18:00 AM
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    that's a very nice expressed Haiku,thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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    Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/29/2012 6:39:00 PM
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    A skillfully written Haiku -most enchanting. Thanks for your kind comments on my Tanka Demands of Love. Modesty is your virtue Carol. You inspire others to write. How sweet of you. Love. -Mohammad
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    Matthew Anish
    Date: 11/23/2012 9:32:00 PM
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    Nice mystical feel to this one. Hope this missive finds you and yours well. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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    Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/19/2012 9:22:00 PM
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    Love your haiku, Carol, I posted a few. Though I always like others more then mine;} you have a blessed day ,,,,,
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 11/16/2012 10:10:00 PM
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    VERY COOL AND VIBRANT HAIKU CAROL .. VISUAL PORTRAIT .. THANKXXX SO MUCH FOR MY WIN IN YEAR 2012 CONTEST .. I TRIED TO FOCUS ON THE POSITIVE AND OPTED NOT TO INCLUE THE DEVASTATING HURRICANE LUV .. WE R THANKFUL ALL SAFE .. ENJOY A HAPPY THANKSGIVING TOO ..
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/15/2012 2:55:00 PM
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    and here is another I have missed! I enjoy the imagey you portray here, Carol.
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    CYNDI MACMILLAN
    Date: 11/14/2012 7:21:00 AM
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    I like this haiku, Carol. I like it A LOT. I love the aha, the mood you've created and then maintain. Thanks for all your sweet comments. You really are a sunshine on soup. Cyndi
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    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 11/12/2012 4:19:00 PM
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    I reaaally like this one! Always, Laura
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    harry horsman
    Date: 11/12/2012 3:10:00 PM
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    just like being there, Carol, love this....
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    daver austin
    Date: 11/12/2012 2:08:00 PM
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    SpoooooKEEEEE! This is so evil and wet. LOve, it. Love, daver
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    Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 11/11/2012 11:56:00 AM
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    those phantom tides can do real damage. enjoyed your haiku Carol. Hope you are not getting all the snow we are. 30CM. in two days. Have a nice week. love phyl
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    bl devnath
    Date: 11/11/2012 4:57:00 AM
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    Nice adoration of phantom tide with flowing water. It's marvelous comparison. Loved always, bl
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    Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 11/9/2012 11:25:00 PM
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    phantom tide - shrouded in an air of mystery. Nice one Carol!
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    Darrel Smith
    Date: 11/9/2012 3:05:00 PM
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    really like this one
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 11/9/2012 2:00:00 PM
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    This seems calm and peaceful, a gentle sound of the water just heard.
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 11/9/2012 1:15:00 PM
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    This one's kinda spooky, Carol... But I like it ... Terry
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 11/9/2012 1:05:00 PM
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    Wow, now this one is truly phenomenal my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous and exciting poem this afternoon! You have given me a great smile with this piece, Awesome Work!!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/9/2012 12:53:00 PM
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    - Wonderful haiku poem Carol. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Brown Avatar Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/9/2012 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am laughing Thank you Anne Lise. I am thinking that is what some may call it also. Wishing you a wonderful weekend also. Love, Carol


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