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  1. Date: 9/2/2013 9:19:00 AM

    Good short poem! Have not heard from you in quite a while! How are things in Ohio? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 8:57:00 AM

    Once more here to read this haiku ........Stopping by to say hi... Best wishes ®ards , Mehnaz...

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 8:58:00 PM

    ooo,can be a deep ... i like the ghostly ride.... ..xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:24:00 PM

    A great haiku Carol. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:48:00 AM

    Another great haiku!Love this.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:37:00 AM

    Very nice...I've read it before, but I wanted to read it again...Thanks for your comments...Hugs, Holly Moore

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 4:30:00 PM

    just stopping by to say HI. HOpe you are doing great.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:43:00 AM

    Great ghostly Haiku that you have written today..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for the congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 6:56:00 PM

    That's a very beautiful image!..thanks for your comments..xxoo Holly

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 11:18:00 AM

    that's a very nice expressed Haiku,thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:39:00 PM

    A skillfully written Haiku -most enchanting. Thanks for your kind comments on my Tanka Demands of Love. Modesty is your virtue Carol. You inspire others to write. How sweet of you. Love. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 9:32:00 PM

    Nice mystical feel to this one. Hope this missive finds you and yours well. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 9:22:00 PM

    Love your haiku, Carol, I posted a few. Though I always like others more then mine;} you have a blessed day ,,,,,

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:10:00 PM

    VERY COOL AND VIBRANT HAIKU CAROL .. VISUAL PORTRAIT .. THANKXXX SO MUCH FOR MY WIN IN YEAR 2012 CONTEST .. I TRIED TO FOCUS ON THE POSITIVE AND OPTED NOT TO INCLUE THE DEVASTATING HURRICANE LUV .. WE R THANKFUL ALL SAFE .. ENJOY A HAPPY THANKSGIVING TOO ..

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 2:55:00 PM

    and here is another I have missed! I enjoy the imagey you portray here, Carol.

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 7:21:00 AM

    I like this haiku, Carol. I like it A LOT. I love the aha, the mood you've created and then maintain. Thanks for all your sweet comments. You really are a sunshine on soup. Cyndi

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:19:00 PM

    I reaaally like this one! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:10:00 PM

    just like being there, Carol, love this....

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:08:00 PM

    SpoooooKEEEEE! This is so evil and wet. LOve, it. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:56:00 AM

    those phantom tides can do real damage. enjoyed your haiku Carol. Hope you are not getting all the snow we are. 30CM. in two days. Have a nice week. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:57:00 AM

    Nice adoration of phantom tide with flowing water. It's marvelous comparison. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:25:00 PM

    phantom tide - shrouded in an air of mystery. Nice one Carol!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 3:05:00 PM

    really like this one

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:00:00 PM

    This seems calm and peaceful, a gentle sound of the water just heard.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:15:00 PM

    This one's kinda spooky, Carol... But I like it ... Terry

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:05:00 PM

    Wow, now this one is truly phenomenal my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous and exciting poem this afternoon! You have given me a great smile with this piece, Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:53:00 PM

    - Wonderful haiku poem Carol. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Brown Avatar Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/9/2012 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am laughing Thank you Anne Lise. I am thinking that is what some may call it also. Wishing you a wonderful weekend also. Love, Carol