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Four

Four people were walking at four fourty four
Faith Fullen at aft and Phil Fallon at fore
Then Fallon moved aftward and Fullen went fore
Till fullen was first and Phil Fallon was four


~For the Four, For, Fore contest~

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  1. Date: 3/19/2013 8:43:00 AM
    A very clever and creative take on this contest. Well done! I love that you only used four lines too.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:28:00 AM
    fffffffffffery ffffouurfoorreefooorre funny

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 12:02:00 PM
    Sorry so late but I am here now to say congratulations on your win in this contest Isaiah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 11:05:00 AM
    While stumbling through the text of this tongue twister temptation tried tauntingly to trip me up... Trepidation tripped Treacherously onto the scene and transgressions came terribly close to traumatic reality..... Jake

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:03:00 PM
    Isaiah, congratulations with your win in Debbie's contest~ PD

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 9:10:00 AM
    Very funny, Isaiah! Congrats on your win. Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 3:27:00 AM
    Congratulations Isiah, love this one xx

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:08:00 PM
    wow, very clever this is. I think Deb, the judge will really like this in her contest!!!

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:09:00 AM
    I love this. I hope it won, it surely should have. I see you are new. Welcome. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 3:21:00 AM
    Very well penned Isaiah! It makes for a good story and you've worked it into the theme cleverly. Nice! Very nice!