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the red wolfs speech

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the red wolfs speech

she said "what have you to offer me?"
I answered with sincerity. 
"my queen, i am humble. i have not much to offer, as i have no money or kin to speak of.
but heed my words, queen, as i come for reasons even god would not understand.
i bring to you, my queen, only what you see.
i offer to you my heart. let the blood it flows sustain you.
i offer you my soul, and may its vitality teach you more than any teacher.
i give you my body, and may its warmth keep you through the night, 
so that you may never be alone, my queen, so long as i live.

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:50:00 PM
    Any Queen, or woman otherwise would be foolish not to take your offerings Gi ga ge Wa ya...I appreciate your wise words and look forward to reading more as well...I am curious Res Wolf, what did your Queen say to you?

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 12:28:00 PM
    So giving this red wolf is. I enjoyed this write! :) Tanya

    Murder Avatar Charlie Murder
    Date: 12/3/2012 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you. i enjoyed writing it. it was based off of a dream i had that i turned into a short story.
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 1:42:00 AM
    Izzy welcome to the soup, I like this verse of yours it has good content, and I think it has the potential to made into a good short story or flash fiction, well done...David

    Murder Avatar Charlie Murder
    Date: 12/3/2012 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you david...it was a short story originally but i shortened it for lack of space.
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:29:00 PM
    Izzy, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:13:00 PM
    That Red Wolf, he some kinda lover. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:48:00 AM
    A writer of all, a master of none but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Izy. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol