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When Poets Meet

comets race
   words multiple
              then multiple again

a blur really
       like fine dust
               light years ahead

some words uttered angelic
                        a few lost in flames
    but all disappeared

alive somewhere
           ending the conversation
       like earth began

with power to reverse waterfalls
               flooding
               tongues that pant with hate

sowing oats
          or confetti

however proper one
                 can propose...

                                     beyond

                                                        event 
          
                                                                         horizon 




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  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:54:00 AM

    you do have the power to reverse waterfalls flooding tongues that pant with hate with your blissful poetic spirit and grace ..

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:48:00 PM

    a very interesting one for message and format as well. event horizon! Cool!!

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 2:49:00 PM

    I love what you've done with this. This is poetic art painted with brilliance poet!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:28:00 PM

    James, love the ending , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) PD

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:48:00 PM

    very cryptic, jimbo... a puzzle that i want to savor in free verse style, like a universe bursting or a loss of someone... grrreat stuff!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:32:00 AM

    I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it as always Jimbo. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 6:27:00 AM

    James, thanks for your nice poem - easy to like. - Have a really good weekend. - (Here we have lots of rain and wind, cold and wet) oxox a hug to you. - / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:50:00 AM

    nice one Jimbo xx

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:39:00 AM

    enjoyed, love elizabeth