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Rain

Drip, pitter-patter;
Rain falls from a slate-grey sky
And renews the earth.

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  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:42:00 AM

    Regeneration often comes from a dark, decaying form. The grey, foreboding sky recycles the enervating elixif of life, water. You have aptly captured this scientific principle in your worthy poem. Enjoyed your well-conceived thoughts on rain!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 4:56:00 AM

    A very well written haiku poem, Tara. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)