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Gray-Stoned Vineyard

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Below is the poem entitled Gray-Stoned Vineyard which was written by poet Laura Breidenthal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Gray-Stoned Vineyard

vines grow free
the ruins crashed in nature
gray and green

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  1. Date: 1/4/2013 3:53:00 PM
    Love the haiku here. Have a great New Year Laura ;}

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 3:02:00 PM
    yes i too love the imagery here, one of the best Haiku's i seen for a long time...

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 10:12:00 PM
    Hi Laura, some how i love the image that emerges in your haiku.... i just love nature, gray and all.... always~pd

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 7:26:00 PM
    I like it. Reminds me of Ozymandias. So you can be Shelley with grace and simplicity since vineyards are the works of mankind. Wonderful

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 7:26:00 PM
    awesome image...clearly can see this one...great haiku!

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:05:00 AM
    Beautiful, well written very nice Haiku... Hugs - Laila

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:11:00 PM
    Ruins are the wrinkles of the earth.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 3:08:00 PM
    Interesting image... very nice... Terry (& thanks for your kind comments)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:05:00 AM
    If you want to make it a pure haiku, here is a suggestion. Vines freely sprouting. Archaic buildings crumbling. Grey stones shroud green shoots. Richard is right. This is a scintillating scene captured by your distinguished mind. I love the contrast! Man-made artifacts tumble down, forever gone; while nature recycles treasure from its trove. Enjoyed your verse!

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 11/9/2012 1:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the gracious suggestion! I will make a few changes soon. :D ~Laura
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:12:00 AM
    I appreciate this one especially since seeing the ruins in Pompey just a few weeks ago.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 4:59:00 AM
    A very well written haiku poem, Laura. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 7:47:00 PM
    Beautiful haiku.I can visualise it.