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Lovers dictionary fun

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Lovers dictionary fun

They were young, 
Their love was a tender bloom
They struggle with the yearning
Deep in their inner soul

But love isn’t for them because
Religion is the chess board they are just a pawn
Being bamboozled with contempt
From elders  throwing  scorn

All they want is each other
Want to cherish the flame
Deep  within their hearts
Not hang their heads in shame.

They have done no wrong
Just fallen in love, want to taste
The passion they feel
But have not savoured in haste

Their attempt at a relationship
Which changed from affection to love
Not the abomination that they 
Are told they are guilty of.

So silently they run away
To families they are now dead
Knowing they can never come home
Whilst animosity raises it’s head


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  1. Date: 12/11/2012 1:12:00 PM

    You bring back memories of Romeo and Juliet in this dictionary fun poem, Seren, congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 5:54:00 PM

    Congrats on this wonderful write Seren! Hugs

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/10/2012 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hugs, Cecilia and thank you...Seren
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:18:00 PM

    congrats on your win Seren

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 5:11:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning place Seren this is a stunner girl xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/10/2012 8:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mandy, I am surprised at this win....Seren
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 12:05:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Seren!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/10/2012 8:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Vicky for your congrats ...Seren
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:28:00 PM

    A well deserved win poem, congratulations. -A poem to be proud of, very well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:28:00 PM

    Congrats on this win...I was captured quickly by your entry's title! :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/10/2012 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Gwendoline.glad you liked the title as well as the poem....Seren
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:23:00 PM

    Seren, ;-)congratulations with your "Dictionary fun" winning poem... most enjoyed~ LINDA

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/10/2012 8:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda,glad you enjoyed it..Seren
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:31:00 PM

    To be a runaway in love, why not, it's part of us. Many simply don't go down this road. Love it Seren :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/16/2012 7:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for your comments ...Seren
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 9:27:00 AM

    This world can never be out of religion and religious people can't kill true love except body. Love is out of reach of adamant religious people. You have nicely worded. A song is there written and sang by Dr. Bhupen Hazarika of my state, Assam, like you poem. Loved always, bl

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/14/2012 7:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank u
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:13:00 AM

    "Religion is the chess board they are just a pawn" - the best words in this poem. Enjoyed reading it. Best wishes, Larisa

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/9/2012 6:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Larisa for your comments
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:40:00 PM

    When love is restricted, hearts are constricted. Well written Seren!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/9/2012 6:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Vicky
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:15:00 PM

    How tender there heart must be, you can't hold it back when it's real, enjoyed, vie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/9/2012 6:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments Vie
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 7:29:00 PM

    I love this poem, i could feel the intrigue in it, beautiful poem - Yanny

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/9/2012 6:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Yanny
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 7:09:00 PM

    You have penned a bitter sweet story using those words.Lovely read.Best wishes to you.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/9/2012 6:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your comment Kash