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lazy noon









                                                        lazy noon---
                                                  the coos of a dove
                                                   are nicely spaced









 

                                                        
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                                                Placement:2nd ;(Nov. 2012)

                                                Contest:Another Poem

                                                Sponsor:Susan Burch

                                                 By:kash poet

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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 8:09:00 AM

    more soupmail.

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 12:02:00 AM

    a miniature of greatness. reading this........... woooooooooooooow Felicitations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 2:09:00 PM

    I like your haiku, Kash! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 12:33:00 PM

    Congrats Kash, --waiting for the coos of noon to softly woo me. Love this haiku. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 6:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in this contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:37:00 PM

    CONGRATS KASH ON A SWEET WRITE AND WIN LUV .. COOS OF A DOVE SPACED NICELY AS LOVERS BREATHE ..WPW

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 1:13:00 PM

    Kash, congratulations in Susan's "Another fun poem" contest... have a nice day... :-) Linda...

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 11:23:00 AM

    Dreamy always so dreamy..do a WAKE UP or woken up one for me okies. I do like this it's just you always seem to be dreaming? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 9:05:00 AM

    congrats on your win Kash

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 8:37:00 AM

    AWESOME! Congratulations! So richly deserved.

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:42:00 AM

    Bravo my friend... a true poet on all levels.... Michael

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:40:00 AM

    The detail you turn into poetry is beautiful.

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 12:09:00 PM

    Lovely haiku...lot of doves come to my balcony and windows daily. This haiku hence seems too familiar in feeling. Well done here!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:37:00 AM

    This is beautiful!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:25:00 AM

    I feel like I am sitting by the sea. Thanks for the momentary escape.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:24:00 AM

    I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Kash as usual. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:53:00 AM

    oh my gosh I just looked down and saw the person below me also said awwww Kash, if you go see my blog, you will see something neat I found out about our poems here.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:52:00 AM

    awww, this is sweet, Kashinath!!! On your other haiku, you got robbed my friend. That magnificent one should have been on the winners list!!

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:56:00 PM

    aww this is awesome. I love doves and their comforting coos. Nicely written. Always, laura

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 1:38:00 PM

    Sounds lovely, Kash .... you are the best!! - Have a lazy afternoon. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/8/2012 1:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Haiku xxxx (?) - :) :)
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 1:24:00 PM

    This is a wonderful and truly desirable write! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly delightful and lovely poem this afternoon! What a fantastic and wondrous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 12:46:00 PM

    another pow wow of a 'ku, kashi... bring it on; more, more.. buy a new cellphone, darn!..lol..:) huggs!