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Cloud Nine

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Cloud Nine

Your Love flows through my body
With static delight
As you hold me in your tender arms
Under moonlight tonight

The passion in our eyes
Sparkling brighter than the stars
As we drift on beautiful love
Past jupitor and mars

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 3:18:00 AM
    Just a note to keep love growing.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 1:41:00 PM
    Dear Elizabeth, After reading this POETIC Masterpiece, I see YOUR LOVE outshines all YOUR other Attributes. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 12/15/2012 5:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Love you too xox
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:30:00 PM
    THANKS FOR COMENTS ELIZABETH JUST STOPING BY TO READ YOUR POEM AGAIN XX DAVIDSCOTT YOU HAVE SOUP

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 12/13/2012 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David, love Elizabeth xx
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 4:47:00 AM
    How ethereal! A wonderfully romantic rhyme! :)

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 12/9/2012 12:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Eileen, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 12:08:00 PM
    VERY NICE POEM CLOUD NINE A WORD I UESD IN MY POEM SUBLIME WICKED I DID ASK HER OUT BUT SHE WAS ALREADY SPOKEN FOR I DID A FOLLOW UP CALLED HSE KNOWS WHICH EXPLAINS WHAT HAPPENED XX DAVIDSCOTT

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/29/2012 3:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David, That's a shame about your girl, you shouldn't have left it too late, love Elizabeth xx
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Wonderful imagery... Pleasantly seductive and Tastefully presented. Sweet to the core..... Jake

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/20/2012 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jake, Love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:57:00 AM
    love the title, and it hit me in the eye like a pizza pie

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/11/2012 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you jennifer, hope your eye is ok :) have a beautiful day love elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:43:00 PM
    WOW WONDERFULLY WRITTEN,FEEL THE DEPTH,GREAT WRITE ELIZABETH

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/11/2012 5:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard, have a wonderful day, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:37:00 PM
    This is sooo cute and romantic! Love it :) made me *smile* ear to ear

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/9/2012 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sharon, love elizabeth