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Forever

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Forever

Love arrived in Autumn like a Spring breeze,
Out of its time and out of its season,
Its dancing spirits left me ill at ease,
And the dark shadows, taunted my reason.

The green leaves that were my days before you,
Have drifted and faded and are no more.
The naive moments of white clouds on blue,
Have become remains on the forest floor.

The light and gentle glory was divine.
There was even a glimpse of forever,
But that which I was lent is never mine, 
We only borrowed the time together.

I have heard the loveliness in a song,
And tasted the exquisite fruits and fare,
But the prize that is stolen feels wrong,
And the promise of joy becomes despair.

Love lets us believe in eternity,
Like a white bird flying across the sky,
Forever is until you discard me,
Chasing another golden butterfly.

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  1. Date: 7/31/2014 10:40:00 AM
    Now here, your use of rhyme is just right. The poem is much easier to read, and the point of the poem comes across perfectly! I would tighten it a bit by making the rhythm perfect, too. And, remember, Catherine, I do not speak by example, since I have written both loosely and very tightly when the subject was conducive to it. Nor do I speak as a teacher (though I once was)--just another schmo. :-)

    Tunke Avatar Catherine Tunke
    Date: 8/1/2014 5:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading. It's a shame you are incapable of "feeling" anything.
  1. Date: 6/9/2014 12:22:00 PM
    Very exquisite write. I call this “poetry” in fact. : ) You write so impeccably and eloquently. Great writing portrayed here. You know…the poem you commented on was describing a character and she is a bitter one at that. That’s why I sound negative and bitter ‘cause I’ve transformed into her in that verse/prose/whatever you label it as. Brilliant beginning to end and extremely flowy. Keep up the fanciful writing and check out my “less” bitter and more “verse-like” poems if you dare. xD I can read your poem backwards and it still makes sense. Maybe you can write it that way too (just a suggestion though take it or leave it). A little revising if it’s backwards though! Haaha

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 6/9/2014 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Welcome to poetrysoup by the way! Nice love poem as people say!
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 11:03:00 PM
    This write is a roller coaster of love. Happiness to sad. The feelings let the reader into your heart. Nice job

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 12:26:00 PM
    wow, this is an excellent piece! The best poem I've read so far today! regards INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 2:01:00 AM
    Simply beautiful , love it

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 9:19:00 PM
    Welcome Catherine! Yes! Love is the moving and the discovering. Simple and beauty. I love it!

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 9:04:00 AM
    Beautiful write...thank you Catherine for sharing your nice and wonderful work...ENJOYED !!!! <3<3<3 SK :)

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 7:59:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Catherine. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 5:55:00 AM
    wonderful poem on love, enjoyed love elizabeth

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 4:43:00 AM
    a like it similar to what i would write myself.