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Love's pain

A little more than tipsy,
 So truth be my master,
 Cannot be the girl for u
 For love is my disaster,
 Alone always I must be
 For all I can see is blue
 So forgive and forget me,
 For I don't know wat I do.
 
I loved you with all my heart
 As my mind it broke apart
 I know I caused u pain
 Those tears in the rain
 I'm just too human to be loved
 As away from you I shoved
 I just love far to much
 To ever really be in touch
 Alone in my world I live
 Just not enough to give
 
In love I always deeply fall
 As I give my very all
 But too intense they say
 As I wave by another day
 The dusk, a sign of an end
 To another very good friend
 
As i walk through this busy mall
 The tears just continue to fall
 Around me a bustling crowd
 Can't drown my thoughts so loud
 
My tears they never cease to flow
 The hurt bubbling from deep below
 A million things ill just never know
 So many truths I can never show
 

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  1. Date: 1/18/2013 5:08:00 PM

    * HMMM, I GUESS IT'S TRUE THAT ONE CAN NEVER TRULY TELL A BOOK BY ITS COVER, SWEET BEAUTIFUL PRECIOUS LAURA ~ BECAUSE GAZING UPON YOUR LOVELINESS, RARELY, SHALL ONE FIND AS BEHOLD, SOOO MUCH BEAUTY ~ THIS BEING SAID THEN POINT IN RE AT HAND, READING YOUR TREASURES PROFOUND HEARTFELT WORDS WOULD SEEM AGAINST THE TIDES AMID THIS WORLDS PHYSICALS EYES AS EXPECTATIONS ? HOPEFULLY THIS IS MERELY AN EXPERIMENT IN EMPATHY ? "BEAUTY IS BEAUTY 'YOUR HEART.'" ~ BEAUTIFUL, WAS YOUR VISIT ~ MY LOVE, ALWAYS, RACHEL *

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 9:29:00 PM

    Welcome Laura! Can there be anything more conscious and emotional? So far I haven't yet and this poem has touched me really. Love it! And thank you for sharing.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 2:53:00 PM

    wonderful poem Laura, hope you are feeling better soon, heartache can be a pain, just make sure it was worth it :) love elizabeth