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Aberrant Waffle

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Aberrant Waffle

In a moment my Mom just came
She said when we welcomed by the death
Maybe the soul would be shifted to other planet
Possibly moon is the waiting room

She said people could float in the outer space
Similar thing that spirits do
Maybe we granted a pair of wings
When we flee to the planet unseen

I said
Maybe other world just like Bermuda
When we blink, abandon the world
We just begin in other swirl

Possibly Mars would be an option

Digress thoughts but colored my day
Silly talked but tickled my brain
She inspires the time of spare 
Dearest Mom I thanked you for share



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                                                     Honorable Mention
              Any poem not posted for a contest in the last 3 months under 20 lines
                                             Contest Judged:  11/12/2012 
                                          Sponsored by: Black Eyed Susan
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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 7:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Poem Not Entered in a contest" Yanny. Love, Carol

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/15/2012 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Carol, and glad to have a visit by you :) have a great day :D - Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:40:00 PM
    this is so sweet how you talk with your mom. YOu would not believe the silly things my son would try to discuss with me when he was a teen. I enjoyed this. Congrats on the win.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/13/2012 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea :), glad to know that you enjoyed this poem, sometimes silly talked needed between me and my mom, just for filling the empty space between us and replaced it with giggles, I really enjoyed those conversation too :D - Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 8:22:00 AM
    Many congratulations Yanny! hugs, LG

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/13/2012 8:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much LG - rehug, :D
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Yanny, well done xx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/13/2012 12:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:44:00 PM
    Yanny, congratulations in Susan's contest... xox~pd

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/12/2012 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you PD :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:16:00 AM
    Very nice Yanny!Congrats on your win.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/12/2012 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kash :)
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 6:24:00 AM
    Yanny, this is very well written poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/8/2012 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne - hug Yanny :)
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:41:00 PM
    nice write Yanny

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/7/2012 7:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard :) - Yanny
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 7:17:00 PM
    Yanny, a lovely poem, to mom...love PD

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/6/2012 7:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank's PD for stopping by :) - Regard Yanny