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In Life

In Life In life, a person can get old before their years If they allow their happiness to drown within their tears In life, a person can seem older than what they are Having been dealt with so much pain and left with permanent scars In life, a person’s soul can die years before their death If it never knew that it would survive through each breath In life, a person’s dreams someday will soon feel too far away to reach If they wait endless years to decide it wasn’t meant to be In life, a person’s heart is a place where their soul lives within Unless they shut down their feelings because of where they've been A person will never give themselves the chance to live If they don’t allow the seed of life to do what it was meant to give

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  1. Date: 11/8/2012 9:49:00 AM

    AMAZING POETRY GAIL .. A BEAUTIFUL INSIGHT INTO LIFE LUV .. NOW YOUR CONTEST WINTER BLANKET CLOSED AS U HAVE NOV. 8TH AS CLOSE DATE .. I JUST WROTE AN ENTRY FOR U SO PLEASE PUT CONTEST BACK LUV .. THANKXXX..

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/8/2012 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Sweetie, I am so sorry. I put the wrong date down to end the contest. It has been corrected. I look forward to your entry. Love always, Gail
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:00:00 AM

    Truth written in these lines..Enjoyed reading this morning..There is saying which may have come from a song.."Some people can't live for fear of dying"...Enjoyed reading this morning..Sara

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 4:05:00 PM

    True, this write is definitely the truth my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening and purely hopeful poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!