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FIRST SCHOOL DANCE

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FIRST SCHOOL DANCE

FIRST SCHOOL DANCE

It was a dance
Like any other
Half the girls
Danced with their brothers
I stood there against the wall
Tossing up a volleyball
I leaned on the coke machine
Then I saw him smart and lean
Smiled at me--I felt the dart
WOW I thought THIS IS THE START
When he walked across the room
Winter snow had magic bloom
Blushes crept along my face
As he neared my shadowy place
Then he turned abruptly right
His love object—Diet Sprite.

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  1. Date: 11/6/2012 8:41:00 AM
    A great write and very enjoyable read Victoria. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:28:00 AM
    WAHGAH! It was so sweet and then....POW! Wow, this was a great, entertaining read. I am sorry if this happened! Though I have to laugh a little, it caught me off guard. Thanks for sharing us your clever work! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 11:21:00 PM
    hey, it's just like a commercial I saw once similar to this. How awful if this really happened to ya. haha. But I think this was just a good funny poem!! Guess what? I can't post a poem. My soupmail and member area also disappeared. Please can you tell me if you can do stuff?? I'm very worried.