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The Last Great Day

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The Last Great Day

10/13/12
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The words of God are a great comfort The day—the Last Great Day—depicts judgement That will come upon everyone equally God hasn’t even begun to work With the mass majority of the world But His glorious salvation is revealed to all But for all to hear, The spiritual component of God Will be added to their thoughts —their ears will open They will have the opportunity to repent There will be judgment For those who really long to change, Doors will be open For those who choose their own way, He will throw into the Lake of Fire with Satan —a most merciful action For any way except God’s is the path leading to evil And in due course to anger, Sadness and death Those who choose to be gone Will be gone Many will weep and mourn… Until the day of Judgment, Prepare Once you receive the knowledge of the truth Practice it For you will be held accountable For your sins God will not overrule our human will He wants us to choose And continue to choose Not all names will be seen in the Book of Life I will be among the weeping
*inspired by John Anderson* -a special thanks to Charles Henderson for helping me edit this piece. It looks so much better now! Thank you!-

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  1. Date: 11/7/2012 11:25:00 AM
    Oh Laura..you are on the inspirational roll these days:-) Yep,lots of wisdom brought through your pen here.Great free verse,the kind that gets under my skin and stays there for quite awhile:-) Always,Arild

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 7:27:00 PM
    Another great write dear Laura...The wisdom seeps from your words. :o)

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 6:42:00 PM
    this one makes you ponder many thoughts, enjoyed reading this inspirational work...nice poem!

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 1:25:00 PM
    Let not God's kingdom be a territory of lament - I respect the clarity with which you profess your enormous beliefs Laura - it is fascinating to understand this aspect of your reality - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:28:00 PM
    I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY ON THIS ONE THE WORLD IS CRULE THAT I MENTIONED IN WORLD IN MY EYES AND NOW AND THEN BUT IF YOU BELEVIEN GOD YOU MUST BELEIVEN THE DEVIL THEY SAY EVERY MANS HIS OWN WORSE ENEMY XX DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 8:08:00 AM
    Hi Laura thanks for your recent comment on my work, glad you have a strong faith well portrayed here, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 7:41:00 AM
    Laura, thanks so much for all your comments recently. gosh, I am not sure that there will be an actual lake of fire. I think it's symbolic for psychological pain. Admire your faith and I am sure you will not be among those weeping! I am late for work. Wish I could read more but I have a really busy day ahead of me. Today I get a homestay person to live with us and I'm nervous. See ya, lady!!

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 3:15:00 AM
    Doors will be open.....well written Laura. - // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:33:00 AM
    Nice staff and I agree with the ideas expressed!

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 11:29:00 PM
    Ah I love this one. Such greatness and just...overall amazing (: Always, Becca