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Crisis in Identity

Misguide in knowledge
Misled in society
Grain pretend as wheat

Poor generation
Camouflaged by the motion
Lost in true nation

Your skin ain't no lie
Intelligence miss your mind
Turn back, take a side 

Ain't no harm you plead
To the country where you breathe
Dedicate indeed


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                                                     Honorable Mention
                                                       Your best haiku
                                             Contest Judged:  11/18/2012  
                                                 Sponsored by: Nathan a
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  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Yanny. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 11:07:00 AM

    Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 3:55:00 PM

    Hi Yanny - Many congratulations to you! - Gail

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/20/2012 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Gail, a warm welcome by you too :D -Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 9:54:00 PM

    Hi, Yanny, it's nice to see your haiku on this winners' list. congrats to you.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/19/2012 10:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea, really nice to have you here too :D, Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 2:43:00 PM

    Yanny:-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/19/2012 5:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank's PD, your haiku is awesome too, and congrats to your first winner :D
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 10:11:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Yanny! love/hugs, Leonora

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/19/2012 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Leonara, it's a pleasure to have a visit by you :D - Hug,
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 2:09:00 AM

    CONGRATS YANNY ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS OUTSTANDING HAIKU LUV ..

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/19/2012 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda, you brighten up my day too :D, Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 10:19:00 PM

    Kuddos on your win, Yanny! Ruben

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/18/2012 10:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ruben :), really glad to have a warm greeting from you :) , and wishing you a great day too :D - Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 9:38:00 PM

    good haiku' Nate

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/18/2012 10:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Nate :), you make my day too :), wishing u a great day :D- Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:57:00 PM

    ! AND THE BLIND SHALL LEAD THE BLIND, SWEET BEAUTIFUL YANNY, THROUGH THE VALLEY OF TEN MILLION LIGHTS ? ITS ALL A SQUASH BABY GIRL, DIDN'T YOU KNOW ? WOE TO THE FALLON, AS FORWARD THEY MARCH! SHALL THOSE ENLISTED ENTANGLE THEMSELVES AMID WORDLY AFFAIRS ? WHY SWEAT THE GRAVE, WHEN THE STARS DO WAIT ? THUS I DO DIG YOUR PRECIOUS BEAUTUY'S POWERFUL POE; SUPER KUDUS. ALSO, THANK YOU, FOR YOUR BEAUTIFUL KIND SWEET VISIT. MY LOVE TO YOU, FOREVER, RACHEL *

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 3:35:00 AM

    Beautifully crafted Haiku masterpiece. I've tried many times to create Haiku but the words stay hidden and my pen freezes. I salute you and feel there is great talent behind this post..... Jake

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/6/2012 7:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jake, pleasure to have a visit by you :) - Regard, Yanny