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Luba

The stars are your eyes
On a dark night they are 
fireflies
They are beautiful honey dew 
flowers
Along with the moonlight they 
dance
They dance to the sweet sound 
of the earth's rotation

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 9:25:00 AM

    Dancing to the earth's rotation - good thought, great eyes. Congrats on the selection. daver

    Delva Avatar Lisa Delva Date: 12/7/2012 9:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much ! -Lisa
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 1:52:00 PM

    5 beautiful lines written here Lisa..enjoyed reading..regards INK-U-SCRIPT

    Delva Avatar Lisa Delva Date: 11/15/2012 5:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you much! -Lisa
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 8:13:00 AM

    A great write and very enjoyable read Lisa. Love, Carol

    Delva Avatar Lisa Delva Date: 11/6/2012 6:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the love Ms. Carol -Lisa
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 5:30:00 PM

    ! THIS IS VERY ENCHANTINGLY SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL, SWEET BEAUTIFUL LISA. EVERY LINE IS PICTURESQUE IN PRETTY, COLOURS WHICH SWIRL AND TWIRL FASTER THEN THE EARTH ROTATES UPON ITS AXIS, LOL. "BEAUTIFUL." MY LOVE, ALWAYS, RACHEL *

    Delva Avatar Lisa Delva Date: 11/5/2012 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so very much. I appreciate your kind words! Much love - Lisa