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About This Poem

often day dreaming

often day dreaming
I lost touch with the real world
till my tummy growled




For The Trinity contest of Debbie

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  1. Currin Avatar
    Anne Currin
    Date: 1/21/2013 8:58:00 AM
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    Haha you would be surprised how often this exact thing happens to me! I love it :) and oh- thank you sooo much for your kind words on Release, you really flattered me immensely, you are so sweet :)
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/9/2012 4:59:00 PM
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    YASSSSSSSS so so good!!! I've missed your work lately.. hope your well luv Michael
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 11/9/2012 3:10:00 PM
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    Ahhh!!I totally like this one..I like the ending..Good that you can become so engrossed with something..Thanks so much for stopping by...Sara
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    elizabeth wesley
    Date: 11/9/2012 2:29:00 PM
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    Perfect count and some neat humor in that last line. mYou're right on top Yasmin! Love, Elizabeth
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    Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 11/9/2012 1:22:00 PM
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    Hey hey Yasmin, today I am on P.S. looking, it is a long time since I've been here but now I'm here to read your poems, in the hope that you will read my latest poem, I liked your poem a lot wonderful!!!. luck in the contest!!! Hugs - Laila ;o)
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 11/5/2012 3:57:00 PM
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    what a sharp element of surprise, mareeey... how are you??.. miss you a lot already... having fun witht he pareeys?.. keep in touch!...:) winning huggs from priya
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/5/2012 3:32:00 PM
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    oh my this is wonderful!!!
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 11/5/2012 1:12:00 PM
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    hi Yasminn very clever senryu, good luck in the contest , all the best Owen
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/5/2012 12:10:00 PM
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    I often am lost in thoughts as well. Now that you mention it, I am starting to get a little hungry.
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 11/5/2012 10:50:00 AM
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    Wow, this is a phenomenal write my friend! I am enamored by the grace of your poem! I love this incredible and delightful piece, Great Work!!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/5/2012 10:41:00 AM
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    Yasmin, this is very good - well done!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/5/2012 10:01:00 AM
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    Oh this is so good, I am not a fan of senyru or haiku (because I can't do it) but the odd ones come through and do hit me where they should. This is one of them. xx


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