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  1. Date: 1/21/2013 8:58:00 AM
    Haha you would be surprised how often this exact thing happens to me! I love it :) and oh- thank you sooo much for your kind words on Release, you really flattered me immensely, you are so sweet :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 4:59:00 PM
    YASSSSSSSS so so good!!! I've missed your work lately.. hope your well luv Michael

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 3:10:00 PM
    Ahhh!!I totally like this one..I like the ending..Good that you can become so engrossed with something..Thanks so much for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:29:00 PM
    Perfect count and some neat humor in that last line. mYou're right on top Yasmin! Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:22:00 PM
    Hey hey Yasmin, today I am on P.S. looking, it is a long time since I've been here but now I'm here to read your poems, in the hope that you will read my latest poem, I liked your poem a lot wonderful!!!. luck in the contest!!! Hugs - Laila ;o)

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 3:57:00 PM
    what a sharp element of surprise, mareeey... how are you??.. miss you a lot already... having fun witht he pareeys?.. keep in touch!...:) winning huggs from priya

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 3:32:00 PM
    oh my this is wonderful!!!

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 1:12:00 PM
    hi Yasminn very clever senryu, good luck in the contest , all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 12:10:00 PM
    I often am lost in thoughts as well. Now that you mention it, I am starting to get a little hungry.

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 10:50:00 AM
    Wow, this is a phenomenal write my friend! I am enamored by the grace of your poem! I love this incredible and delightful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 10:41:00 AM
    Yasmin, this is very good - well done!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 10:01:00 AM
    Oh this is so good, I am not a fan of senyru or haiku (because I can't do it) but the odd ones come through and do hit me where they should. This is one of them. xx