The Onslaught


the buffeting blow
of tempestuous typhoons~~
fatal upheaval

winds assailing earth
with a cataclysmic force~~
nature's debacle

devastating pith
denuding all normalcy~~
catastrophic rap

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/10/2012 6:25:00 PM Ysmin, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed stopping by to read all the hurricane haiku... every winner on this list had a mind blowing image... take care~ Always PD*
kash poet Date: 11/9/2012 10:43:00 AM Yasmin,Congrats on your win in the haiku contest.Love it!
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/9/2012 7:49:00 AM Congratulations on your win in the Hurricane Haiku contest Yasmin. Love, Carol
craig cornish Date: 11/9/2012 5:53:00 AM Congrats on your win Yasmin!
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/9/2012 1:45:00 AM Congratulations on your winning poem in Hurricanes contest, well done!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/9/2012 1:32:00 AM Congratulations on you well deserved win Yasmin. will get around to finding my linkden password today xx
Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/9/2012 12:11:00 AM you used such great vocabulary in your haiku set. Congrats on the winners list.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 11/9/2012 12:08:00 AM CONGRATS YASMIN ON WINNING AN HM FOR A GREAT WRITE ON HURRICANE FURY LUV ..
Sandy Ivy D Date: 11/8/2012 8:03:00 PM thank you' san
Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/6/2012 8:41:00 PM ;-)..pd
Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/5/2012 3:33:00 PM awesomely done, cutie!!
John Loving III Date: 11/5/2012 1:36:00 PM Finally learned how to count. Great work and timely pieces
Owen Yeates Date: 11/5/2012 1:13:00 PM hi yasmin natures fury well depicted in this write, all the best Owen
Russell Sivey Date: 11/5/2012 10:31:00 AM You have brought fear into your write here my friend! You brought exactly what one would feel if one were in a Hurricane! I really enjoyed reading this wondrously powerful write this afternoon! What a significant piece, Great Work!!
kash poet Date: 11/5/2012 8:31:00 AM Very good haiku here Yasmin!Best wishes to you.
Yesha Shah Date: 11/5/2012 6:18:00 AM A very apt Haiku describing Nature's fury Yasmin, very well done dear. You paint vivid images here. Nice to read something new from you.