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Old Gentleman Jack

Old Gentleman named jack
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I’ve gotten so drunk/
I did not even know how to act/
After drinking a fifth and two twelve packs/
All of my inhibitions Just sunk like/ an old elephants’ trunk.
Though any thoughts to care just fell or collapsed/

I've gotten so drunk /but not all was forgot!/
So, cheers to that Old Gentleman whose name is Daniels Jack?

Poem By: TMP. UNSUPPORTED CODE My Poetry on PoetrySoup UNSUPPORTED CODE 

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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:06:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today TMP. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol