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From Him

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From Him

Heartbroken 
I guess I was wrong.
I'm a total fool.
My love for you was so strong.
How could I have ever loved you?

You said he was no one.
You had no idea who he is.
Well it's obvious he's someone.
With him, I knew what you did.

I gave you all my love.
You'll never know how much I cared.
My life just fell apart.
This pain I just can't bare.

I've been through this before.
Though it hadn't been with you.
I never thought you'd do this..
I always thought you would be true.

Now I must live my life without you.
Together we'll never be..
For you've found someone new.
And no longer need me.

  
12  10   1997  From " his " point of view .

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 3:01:00 PM
    love an hurt, cast into the dirt , feels this poor castaway, the only cure so be alert, is catch his brother hey.... some times feet aren't made of clay... says johnson its a certifyable way.. Don re: "From Him" by Debbie Duncan

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/17/2013 10:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Don.
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:37:00 PM
    Debbie, , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/14/2013 8:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda ;}
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 10:55:00 PM
    my ex ran off in 98, with wife stealing cousin Wayne, Wayne died of cancer of the prostate, which sadly burst his bubble, pain, yet i am sorry mate....

    JOHNSON Avatar DON JOHNSON
    Date: 1/14/2013 11:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    use that white of light sweet babe, a healing there for you, blowing kissesis sweet delight, it brings a smile, it do....
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 6:23:00 PM
    How sad... it's hard to say I 'enjoyed' this poem because of its content. However, it is very well written. Lovely flow and rhyming! Well done Debbie!! Best wishes, Keith. (PS HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/29/2012 6:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Keith,, this is old poem 1990's ;} Happy New Year to you and yours ;}
  1. Date: 12/24/2012 4:44:00 PM
    Just came here to say MERRY CHRISTMAS to YOU.

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 3:51:00 PM
    Enjoyed this Debbie, love Elizabeth

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/23/2012 12:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Liz ;}
  1. Date: 12/20/2012 6:13:00 PM
    this is so interesting that you saw through HIS eyes, it shows your sensitive nature!!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/21/2012 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading Andrea ;}
  1. Date: 12/15/2012 8:28:00 PM
    WOW! heartbreaking. Words that I would like to say but never found a way to arrange them the way that you have. Marvelous job Debbie, Marvelous job!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/15/2012 9:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lillie ;}
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 11:18:00 PM
    Dear Debbie..here you have penned another soupmail for all the readers..very nice..enjoyed !!! <3 <3 <3 SK...wishing you have a blessed day :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/19/2012 1:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sukmawati,,,, this was things he said to me,,,, " my X " He thought I was messing around, when we were first together. He got over it , we lasted 17 years ,,,,you have a beautiful day ;}
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:29:00 PM
    Well Debbie I can see this was taken from tough experience, you did well in its expressions.."

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/12/2012 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Joe,,,, this was things he said to me,,,, " my X " He thought I was messing around, when we were first together. He got over it , we lasted 17 years ;},,,, Thank you for reading my/ his words,,,, Have a blessed day ;}
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 12:08:00 PM
    Great way to express from a different side. Wonderful. Enjoyed. Michael

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/12/2012 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Michael ;}
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:36:00 AM
    I like how you wrote it from his point of view....shows integrity of character, you are a wise lady Debbie! Excellent write! Hugs

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/12/2012 11:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cecilia ;} have a great day !
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 9:05:00 PM
    Perhaps it is all for the best. Take care and God bless. Thanks for reading my work, pleased that you liked it.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/12/2012 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading my words Jancarl ;}
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:01:00 PM
    Debbie, no one deserves to be dumped on, over insecurities. However I hope you are over him. I can go on about this subject, but I will stop here. You might not want to hear this! You are better without him. Specifically since you noted that he found some one so quickly. ~SKAT~

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/11/2012 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading my words SKAT ;} I've been single going on six years now !
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 2:41:00 PM
    Love, can't live with it or without it. Thanks for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/11/2012 3:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Debbie,,,,, this is his point of view,,,, thank you for reading ;}
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:34:00 AM
    Everybody has a poem like this.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/11/2012 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello John,,,, this poem is from him to me " my X " He thought I was messing around, when we were first together. He got over it , we lasted 17 years ;},,,, Thank you for reading my/ his words,,,, Have a blessed day ;}
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:51:00 PM
    Must have been an awful experience for you till the truth sank in. Hard to know someone else completely I think which always causes problems. So sad,and recovery takes its own sweet time.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/9/2012 4:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi " elizabeth" this is / was my X's point of view.... He thought I was messing around, when we were first together. He got over it , we lasted 17 years ;},,,, Have a blessed day ;}
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:30:00 AM
    Hey hey Debbie, today I am on P.S. looking, it is a long time since I've been here but now I'm here to read your poems, in the hope that you will read my latest poem, I liked your poem a lot. xoxo - Laila

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/9/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Why thank you Laila ;} this is/ was my X's point of view.... He thought I was messing around, when we were first together. He got over it , we lasted 17 years ;},,,, I will surely read from you. Have a blessed day ;}
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:47:00 PM
    HI Debbie, wow...this can be heartbreaking... Sometimes it is for the best... always~pd

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/5/2012 10:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi poet ,,,, this poem is from his side to me,,, not me to him. He thought I was messing around, when we were first together. He got over it , we lasted 17 years ;}
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 3:32:00 AM
    A well written poem Debbie, sad story. Thank you for visiting my poem. - Wish you a nice day and a delightful new week. - oxox a hug to you from Anne-Lise :)

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