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a three second pause

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a three second pause

a three second pause
I wish I hadn’t noticed
before “I love you”


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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 7:49:00 AM
    Very good Senryu here Susan.Love it!

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 9:48:00 PM
    remembering this one. Just love it!! Soupmail.

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Is that better or worse than a no response?

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 6:22:00 AM
    catchy! nice job here! on soup after a long long time, happy new year!

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:27:00 PM
    Susan, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 6:38:00 PM
    hurry hurry and put up a new poem!!

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:26:00 AM
    You had to brings there. Right.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 4:20:00 PM
    NICE TITLE!! Very smooth as u are expert at these shorter forms, girl...A special thanks for sponsoring the tail rhyme contest...glad u liked my entry...it's my first or second one ever...Have a great one!! gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 6:10:00 AM
    Congrats on your win the poem is amaizing

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 12:21:00 AM
    Oh,so powerful! Congrats on your win. :o)

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:46:00 AM
    Amazing Susan. What impact in such a small package.

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:05:00 PM
    Susan,,, love your winning poem..pd

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:43:00 PM
    yes, this so deserves to be on the winners' list, my friend. BIG congrats, Susan.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 10:16:00 PM
    Great! Very nice, Susan! Congratulations on your win! Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:56:00 PM
    Wonderful piece,Susan....Good work....Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:40:00 PM
    Awful feeling..you know they didn't want to say it :( Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done B.E.S. - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your fine win xx

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Ssan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 3:54:00 PM
    this is absolutely wonderful. debs does not always see things as I do, but I sure hope she enjoys this as much as I did. Luv ya, andrea

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