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On The Moon

Thea, grandfather Alferd's dog died, she was so old and sick
Now is Thea on the moon, says Adrian who is six

Michael Jackson died so unexpectedly and abruptly
He is on the moon and plays with Thea, says Adrian who is a big fan

Betzy, grandfather Arild's dog died, she was also old and sick
Now Betzy is also on the moon with Thea and Michael Jackson and play all day

Great Grandmother died so unexpectedly and abruptly
Adrian who is six had difficulty understanding

Adrian who is six cried many tears for Great Grandmother
but comforted himself with the fact that she is sitting on the moon and
makes waffles to Thea, Michael Jackson and Betzy.




04.11.2012
A-L Andresen :)  - A true story -

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  1. Date: 6/8/2013 1:55:00 PM
    I have five grandchildren myself (all boys) children are a constant source of inspiration for me. What comes out of the mouths of babes, wonderful stuff my friend, very much enjoyed.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 6/8/2013 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    -Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Gary. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:42:00 PM
    Yes..loved! what a great way to help a kid get through all this! Light & Love sunny! ;)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/10/2013 1:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 1:32:00 PM
    I love this poem - I also had a dog named Lady and wrote something about enjoying my time with her - it also had the aspect of being outside at night with the moon and so forth - it is great to love your dogs so much now I have a little daucsand mix - sorry about the spelling - her name is Dizzy who I will soon write about also - God bless our petss!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/5/2013 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Susan. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/22/2012 3:52:00 PM
    This is really a wonderful couplet, the mourn poem is not always brings sad facts, but it also could be a cheering one, your words in here are really uplifting, and I enjoyed them so much, they give me wisdom through my morning shade, Thank you for your lovely comment in my last page, it is really uplifting too- Hug, Yanny

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/23/2012 1:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yanny, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 3:55:00 PM
    I really enjoy this one!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/16/2012 12:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ira, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:49:00 PM
    Hi Anne Lise - Interesting look into a way a child deals with the concept of death. Love it! - Much love to you, Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/12/2012 3:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Gail. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:58:00 AM
    It's a wonderful poem of belief which seems to mythological one. It's not only sweet but sweet dream like. Thanks always for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/9/2012 10:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments bl. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:02:00 PM
    A great poem. I've been helping my Dad while he's going thru Chemotherapy for his cancer. I don't have much time to write right now, but wanted to let you know I finished another Troll Poem called 'The Mailman Cometh'. Forever your friend... Carol

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/9/2012 1:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Carol. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 7:10:00 PM
    They probably are having a great time there on the moon while sooking down at us in all the mess we've made. Has a fairytale quality about it, love, Lizzie

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/9/2012 1:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Elizabeth. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 1:05:00 PM
    Hi Anne Lise....reads like a heart-wrenching beautiful dream......with a couple "6 yr. old abbreviated speech" moments....nice effect....also, just in general, seems i got that "anguish-pain" feeling that comes just before tears....but didn't cry, maybe cuz your story keeps touching on the comfort of loved ones around after life on this surface......best, jimbo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/8/2012 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Adrian cry no more, they are well on the moon jimbo - - - Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 2:53:00 PM
    This is so delightful my dear sweet Miss Norway! Loved it and loved the last line!Big big hugs, Jack xxx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/7/2012 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Jack. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 10:21:00 AM
    So sad,and sweet...A beauiful write my friend. :o) f.e.f oxox <3

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/7/2012 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Dan. - oxox love and f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 8:10:00 AM
    Its so hard to explain to young innocent chidren about loss,especially loss of loved ones..But sweet Adrian seems to be very smart and understanding dear.Touched my heart and soul..Charma

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/7/2012 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Charma. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:25:00 AM
    nice poem friend Anne Lise..I really like it..You make me smile before I sleep...thanks for sharing and for all your support on my poems.. hugs and kisses from me :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/7/2012 6:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Maria, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 5:47:00 AM
    how is the moon glow over there, anne?... sweet autumn hello to you!..:) huggs always

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/7/2012 6:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nette, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 4:14:00 AM
    Passionately penned,Anne i just enjoyed this.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/7/2012 4:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Fisayo. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 4:58:00 PM
    A charming poem of love and feelings. I like the way the story is told. Thanks for your lavish praise of my Taka Time's Termite, Anne! You are so kind. God Bless You! -Mohammad

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/7/2012 3:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Mohammad. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Such a cute poem, Anne Lise. A child's heart is sooo big. Love and hugs to you and yours, catie :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/6/2012 1:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My next or one of my "old" ... Always welcome back Catie. - Thanks for your visit today :) huggs Anne-Lise :)
    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey
    Date: 11/6/2012 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    your 'second' poem, do you mean your second poem ever? It's adorable! hugs, catie :)
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 11:55:00 AM
    I love this! Enjoyed reading it, very beautiful!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/6/2012 11:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Anne. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 9:00:00 AM
    A LOVELY VISION OF SWEETNESSENJOYING THE MOON'S COMFORT ANNE-LISE .. WRITTEN IN A DELICATE TONE LUV .. BEEN HAVING SO MUCH TROUBLE TRYING TO COMMENT BACK TO POETS WHO KINDLY READ MY WORDS .. DON'T KNOW WHY TPS CANNOT FIX FOR ME ..OH ..

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/6/2012 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate your comments Linda-Marie. - - Welcome to my second poem. - Have a nice and happy day. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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