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An Orchid for my Rose

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An Orchid for my Rose

AN ORCHID FOR MY ROSE?

Your eyes lead me to the Rose
that within your heart your soul,
yet it is the orchid chose
that leads me here, a mind stole
in dreams of the perfect goal.

Now lost am I to you Rose
a loser in mortal shame,
inept another I chose
took a chance on just a name
because life said ‘one of fame.’

Alas this lesson I learn
it’s not how one sees the frame
the truth within this I yearn,
for i am the one to blame
for dousing our true love’s flame!

© Harry J Horsman 2012

For Francine Roberts English Quintain contest
4th Nov 2012

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  1. Date: 11/19/2012 3:24:00 PM

    Naww I don't believe you were to blame, you're a gent! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 12:47:00 AM

    A good and write here on the way things pan out sometimes Harry.. Enjoyed the read today.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 9:12:00 PM

    Such a sad tale Harry, lessons to be learned that somehow are forgotten. When will we wake up? At least you can admit where the blame lies.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:57:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win in the "Romance" contest Harry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 3:45:00 PM

    Glad to see you came out a winner in the contest. she said in her blog that many did not follow the rules. Harry, what is going on? You said you have gotten busy? BIG congrats here.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 3:22:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work...Sara

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 2:14:00 PM

    And so the fire no longer burns. Leaving an aching heart that yearns. A funeral flower for the grave. Of a love you could not save. Beautiful sentiment Harry.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 1:31:00 AM

    Beautiful Write Harry. Warm congrats for the win.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 1:17:00 AM

    Big congratulations on your win harry , new it was a stunner sweetheart xx

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 10:23:00 PM

    congrats on your 4th place win Harry, great job

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 10:58:00 AM

    i really like tihs poem.and thank you for ur comment on mine. Have a good day

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 1:57:00 AM

    Dazzling poetic piece of work, my dear xoxo

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 1:25:00 AM

    Soooooooooooo Beautifully penned Harry.Nice to read your poetry oncemore

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 1:10:00 AM

    A STUNNING MAJESTIC WRITE HARRY LUV .. SO ENSITIVE .. SO ENDEARING .. A FABULOUS TITLE ..ORCHIDS R MY FAV FLOWER OF ALL .. SO PRETTY .. WINNING WISHES LUV..

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 11:49:00 PM

    Harry - Orchid or rose, it does not matter when your words make them equally beautiful..and I don't believe a true flame could ever burn out. We may bank he embers, but we are never lost in the quatraine! You are amazing Harry! Never stop writing, please please!! Elizabeth

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 2:57:00 PM

    sad and romantic, Harry. How can you go wrong with one like this? I have only half an hour to play catch up here and try to reply back to nearly two days of comments to me. sorry I can't seek more of your oldies out to read. Hope you come up with some new ones. I love seeing your new posts. Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 2:31:00 PM

    Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in Francine's contest..Enjoyed reading about your love today...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 1:26:00 PM

    Happens to the best of us.

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 10:53:00 AM

    A truly lovely poem Harry - Luck in contest. - Have a nice new week - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 10:35:00 AM

    Hi Harry! :) Please have a look at Ruben's blog, and please approach it with an open heart. thank you so much, hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 9:35:00 AM

    The Orchid can be so alluring, we sometimes think the exotic is so appealing and that the Rose is ordinary. Our Silly silly hearts are so easily distracted. Another thought provoking poem.

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 8:13:00 AM

    Hi Harry brilliant write, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 5:56:00 AM

    soup xx

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 5:10:00 AM

    Sure, this one was written in one of those rare moments of inspiration, such an attractive piece it is, Harry,.. thnx for your uplifting comments!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 9:28:00 PM

    Harry; This is just beautiful. It has so much feeling. You are not a loser, with this you are a winner. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 6:29:00 PM

    beautifully penned whether fact or fiction, all can relate! Good poem, good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 2:32:00 PM

    Sounds like a remorse that one can rely on for a lifetime Harry - I wouldn't call it a total loss - I like how you use the orchid visa viz the classic rose - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 2:20:00 PM

    Sad but insightful...nice one Harry... Terry

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:27:00 PM

    love this thoughtful write, Harry

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 11:16:00 AM

    Well-written, forlorn poem, 'arry -- you did a fantastic job poetically highlighting the path so many choose....when all along 'twas the Rose shining with love's truth.

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