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Don't

Don't tell me you love me
On a post it note
Don't tell me you care
When you just want to stare
Don't tell me youre mine
On the back of a dime
Don't tell me to wait
I've gone it's too late

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  1. scott Avatar
    david scott
    Date: 2/12/2013 12:27:00 PM
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    just passing by again alredy comented on this one but cool write hope you find love again xxdavidscott
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/25/2013 11:58:00 AM
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    Stupid fellow! Some guys don't get it till its to late. Good poem.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 1/25/2013 3:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We live and learn Richard, thank you, love Elizabeth
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    HGarvey Daniel Esquire
    Date: 12/14/2012 1:34:00 PM
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    Dear Elizabeth, I have to agree with Tim's comment there are those kind of men that hurt not only the women in thier lives but the Loving men that are out there LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/15/2012 4:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes indeed this is very true of both sexes,especially in todays society.
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 11/7/2012 11:07:00 PM
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    ‡ Hey Beautiful Lizzie, Just Passing Back By To Say Thank You For Your Kind Lovely Visit Earlier. Also, I Made A Slight Change As Usual And No Longer Be There A Doctor Involved. Smile, Sweet Kisses, Always, Rachel *

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/8/2012 5:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) thank you sweet Rachel, I'm glad the doctor was no longer needed, love and kisses to you too, as ever elizabeth
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    Tim Ryerson
    Date: 11/7/2012 3:59:00 PM
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    That's telling him Elizabeth!... Not referring to the gentleman you wrote about but some men are egotistical, insecure idiots trying to show off how many hearts they've broken and how many adoring but gullible ladies are still chasing them - Tim

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/7/2012 5:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes indeed Tim, but they will meet their match sooner or later :) thank you for your comment, love elizabeth
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    Richard Palmer
    Date: 11/7/2012 3:28:00 PM
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    lol,sorry lad,Elizabeth is off and running,nice write

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/7/2012 5:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) thank you Richard, love elizabeth
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/6/2012 1:34:00 PM
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    Sometimes us guys can be a bit dense. He must be kicking himself. You know what they say about those guys that stare!

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/6/2012 4:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) indeed, love elizabeth
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    david scott
    Date: 11/6/2012 12:43:00 PM
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    i agree you dont know what yohave till its gone nice write thanks for coments xx davidscott

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/6/2012 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David, love elizabeth xx
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    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 11/5/2012 1:34:00 PM
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    Excellent verse. Very touching and powerful, through only a few words! Always, Laura

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/5/2012 2:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Laura, love elizabeth
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    Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 11/4/2012 7:35:00 PM
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    He was daft and not deft/and won't know why you left. Enjoyed your poem.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/5/2012 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jon, love elizabeth
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    Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/4/2012 6:26:00 PM
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    words are nothing without feelings...yet they say most don't know what they have until it's gone... nice poem :)

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/4/2012 7:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes indeed we can all talk the talk, but who can walk the walk, thank you for your comment, love elizabeth
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 11/4/2012 10:43:00 AM
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    Lovely verse, Elizabeth! Nice use of imagery. Ruben.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/4/2012 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Ruben, love elizabeth
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 11/4/2012 7:05:00 AM
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    ‡ That's Right, We Walk By Faith Not By Sight, Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth. What Shall Be Shall Be. We Just Ride The Sun Made Waves. Wonderful. My Love, Always, Rachel *

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/4/2012 8:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And to you Rachel, love as always elizabeth


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