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Shattered Glass

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Shattered Glass

Shattered Glass
 .......................
 
You took my heart
 And shattered it
 Then left it out in space
 Each tiny piece shines brightly
 full of love I won't replace
 Now all thats left
 are songs and words

 To remind me of your face
 So I will leave my broken heart
 to shine in outer space

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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 6:53:00 AM
    great words up there Liz,,, got to be careful of giving that heart away,,, thank you for reading my Missing Pieces. ;}

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 1/22/2013 7:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie, don't worry i have a spare one :)
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 1:29:00 PM
    Dear Elizabeth, I have put this in my Favorites and YOU as a Favorite POET This POEM is Awesome it brings back fond memories LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 12/15/2012 4:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Harry, I'm glad my heart is finally in safe hands :) xox
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:44:00 AM
    I love the rhyme, the meter, and the thought behind this beautiful poem. This will be put among my favorite poems.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 12/8/2012 5:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jon, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 12:01:00 AM
    Just beautiful Elizabeth! I like the thought of 'shining in outer space', it's like it's free from inhibitions. Well written piece! ps, sorry you caught me during a 'rant ', and thanks for commenting honestly.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/11/2012 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Vicky, no need to be sorry, I rant all the time, its good to get things off our chest, yes outer space is a wonderful place indeed, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 2:39:00 AM
    This is a beautiful poem, it flows so beautifully and is so inspiring even though its sad

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/11/2012 5:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you laura, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 4:47:00 PM
    Wow!!! What an enchanting poem. An amazing write on deprivations of love causing bewilderment and inflicting wounds. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem I want your smile. God Bless you. -Mohammad

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/7/2012 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mohammad, God bless you too, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 12:06:00 PM
    THIS IS A LOT LIKE MY POEM I WROTE COUPLE WEEKS AGO CALLED BROKEN WICKED WRITE XX DAVIDSCOTT

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/5/2012 2:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes I had a look at your poem, It is a wonderful write on love and heartache, love elizabeth xox
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 8:14:00 AM
    I read Richard's poem which led me to yours...this would make a lovely duet in song....love

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/5/2012 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Indeed.. all we need is someone who can sing : ) thank you Joseph
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 10:45:00 AM
    I read Richard's response and I couldnt help...Im here reading your poem. Beautiful write, Elizabeth! Very nice. Ruben.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/4/2012 7:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm so glad he did too Richard, Thank you Ruben, love elizabeth
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/4/2012 6:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So glad you came to read Elizabeth's poem.
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 8:37:00 AM
    I was inspired to write a response

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/4/2012 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your lovely poem Richard, good night God bless, love elizabeth
    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/4/2012 7:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    can't wait to read it Richard :)
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/4/2012 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    When you have a chance come and read the poem I dedicated to yours
    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/4/2012 8:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    how very nice of you xox
    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/4/2012 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard, don't you worry, a good heart will always recover, and shine brighter than ever, with the right person, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 8:24:00 AM
    Intresting perspective, now that it is shattered I pray that all the pieces will attract the love you deserve and reconstruct a beautiful shining heart.