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Unfaithful

Unfaithful do love n hate seperate, by the thin ness of a rhyme, love is hate upon your plate, same passion, hurting time... (thanks Russell Sivey) women say they want a guy, who is ever faithful, true, magnetizing flame burns is why, the moths are drawn to you, mans ego aint sublime, moths come, attractive too, a stronger man, may dodge this time, but weakness confounds you, and so begins the crime… too true:( Don Johnson

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  1. Date: 11/4/2012 5:09:00 PM

    nicely done ;}

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 2:47:00 PM

    (Another) nice one, Don... emotions are so intricate... beyond the realm of reason... I enjoyed... Terry

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 8:47:00 AM

    This crime can be so detrimental and painful my friend! I really believe that having a tender heart is not a weakness! This poem is amazing Don, what a pleasant sight it is! I really enjoyed reading this incredible and wondrous poem this afternoon! What powerful words you have brought for us to read! What a striking piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 2:31:00 AM

    Your poem rings ever true. Thank you for sharing with us. I appreciated reading tonight. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 12:58:00 AM

    Interesting poem Don. Far too often true....unfortunately.