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BLOOMING TENDERLY



A swarm of whispers kisses my face Like tender blossoms, a full view; In morning’s bid, I find thrilled embrace Through good-bye romps as sunrise debuts On fragrant petals carousing dew. My eyes follow his parting tracks on wings As day rouses wisps of garlands’ crowns, Clusters of buds wheeze a mild buzzing To invite play, bouquets tap on ground Their hemlines sway, waltzing all around. When hours cling of delight, time endures And I breathe him as buds fondle my hands, But purple descends to weave sleep’s lure; Sadly, florets close as night expands Till he arrives, with roses on strands. For Francine Roberts'Contest Romance Me with English Quintains by nette onclaud 2 nov 2012

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  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:57:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win in the "Romance" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 3:21:00 PM

    Congrats on your creative winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 1:30:00 AM

    Beautiful Write Nette. Warm congrats for the win.

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 10:20:00 PM

    congrats nette on your 4th place win, great job

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:13:00 AM

    The last lines adorned the real picture of romance. Wonderful always. Good luck. Always, bl

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 4:22:00 AM

    Lovely romantic quintain Nette. such a tender write that grows on you as you read it. Top winner here.

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:15:00 AM

    Super wow for this very romantic poem of yours, Nette! I love every word you've used to paint the lovely picture in your quaintain making me feel blooming tenderly too while reading it. ;)). Winner for sure! Thanks for stopping by and looking forward to read my work. I've new poem to post later; but I'm still thinking of form and title, lol. For me, I'm still a novice here who's still learning and experimenting, (particularly the forms of poetry) :)) i love experimenting. million thx! love, LG

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 7:52:00 PM

    wonderful poem nette, love elizabeth

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 6:19:00 PM

    lovely imagery nette

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 5:24:00 PM

    Sighhh...so you`re in the romantic mood today me dear friend? :-) This is a highly tender poem,Nette.Makes me want to waltz around:) Sending red roses your way! Hugs~Arild

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 5:17:00 PM

    Awww, this is really a sweet poem after all my friend! I am thrilled after reading this incredibly awesome poem Nette! Your descriptiveness brought images of grandiosity to my mind! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 5:02:00 PM

    Poetic verse that blooms with the scent of your well defined words, enjoyed your poem Nette, love always vie

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 4:59:00 PM

    Splendor of romance blooming like flowers. The last line brings on the magic. True poetess!

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 4:57:00 PM

    Nette, you are so romantic on a Saturday night ...... Gorgeous poem! hugs / / Anne-Lise :)