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We Name Storms and Storms Name Us -

Vain, strutting peacocks,
assuming we are bequeathed
the right to exist

For Deb's contest

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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:05:00 PM

    Tim,, congrats..with your poem... pd

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:44:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Tim. I sure remember this profound senryu.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 10:24:00 PM

    Very nice! Congrats on your win in Deborah's Contest, Tim!! Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:45:00 PM

    yes human beings are..aren't we! for foolish the 'dominion of man' bah! humbug! Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:12:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done Tim - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:39:00 AM

    Wow, good description of the human race. congrats on your win..BG

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:50:00 AM

    Congratulations on your fine win xx

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:33:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Tim. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 11:32:00 PM

    tim, I have no soupmails or member area, and I can't post poems or comments to blogs. Is it the same for you? I just noticed this coming back here after 11 p.m but I can see a few people have the ability to do blogs still. Did you send me another soupmail since the last one I responded to this afternoon? If so, could you just give me the message in a comment box of one of my old poems. thanks so much. Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 4:58:00 PM

    the rain reigns.

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:20:00 AM

    a different kind of reflective 'ku, tim... sounds uniquely modern to me.. sail on!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 6:54:00 AM

    Comes from actually believing man is bequeathed dominion [we believe our own press LOL] this is 1 thought, 1 gramatical phrase it must be a visual or sensory fact to be a haiku this is a subjective statement..[meaning your opinion aye? mine TOO..but still unless you are really writing about a peacock you saw you have left haiku-land ;) entering free Verse land ] Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 12:05:00 AM

    Hi Tim, a very interesting entry... good luck and good night...pd

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 8:21:00 PM

    Nice, Tim! Jimbo

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 4:45:00 PM

    True and well written Tim. - Luck in contest - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)