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A candle

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A candle

A candle left
lighting through the dark,

lighting in our land, dearly it mourns you.
A candle left

as it lies by your body, seduced by your ode
futile to tame it's light

solid, illumes the crossed fingers 
entwined.



date: 11/3/2012
craig cornish contest: Loss

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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 4:51:00 AM

    Very well written Johan! The image of the candle solidifies the theme of loss. Nice!

    Poet Avatar Johan Poet Date: 11/12/2012 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks vicky ;)
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 1:26:00 PM

    yes it is Anne,great write Johan,best wishes in the contest

    Poet Avatar Johan Poet Date: 11/8/2012 5:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks ;)
  1. Date: 11/3/2012 4:47:00 PM

    A deep poem Johan . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Poet Avatar Johan Poet Date: 11/5/2012 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you, have a nice day :)