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Pastel

Pastel pink sunrise
Reveals thick damp morning fog
Roosters in chorus

One lead rooster sings loudest
"Ode To Joy" others sing parts

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  1. horne Avatar
    jack horne
    Date: 11/4/2012 1:19:00 PM
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    lol, I wish our neighbour's hens were so musical - love this witty one, my friend
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 11/4/2012 3:28:00 AM
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    There was no visible sunrise this morning... but your Tanka has filled the gap!...Terry
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 11/3/2012 2:11:00 PM
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    This is beautiful Sara, i see you own roosters... this is a wonderful tanka, with a strong image...xox~pd
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 11/3/2012 10:57:00 AM
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    We haven't had a clear day yet, some sunshine here and there, but no starry nights like I described in my poem...that was from previous sightings! This poem is beautiful Sara, I really enjoyed reading this wonderfully enriching poem this afternoon! This write it joyful in its own right, as the roosters sing the lead and the parts! I would love to hear them sing that, this would be delightful! What a wondrous piece you have written my friend, Great Work!!
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 11/3/2012 9:11:00 AM
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    ‡ 'Pastel Pink Sunrise.' I Love That, Tis Sooo Soft And Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Precious Sara. Your Gifted Beauty's Second Line Brings About Intrigue Perhaps ? I Find Joyful Heart's Somehow Someway Within This Lovely Painting; Blue Skies Beyound The Gray. A Beautiful Canvas. My Love, Always, Rachel *
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 11/3/2012 8:24:00 AM
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    Excellent portrayal of sunrise, like it!! Jag
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 11/3/2012 8:05:00 AM
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    Yes, so agree with Anne-Lise here, it is much like a painting, Sara. Beautiful imagery captured.
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/3/2012 7:52:00 AM
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    Your poem is like a painting, Sara - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    raskin bobbins
    Date: 11/3/2012 7:27:00 AM
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    You have painted a lovely sunrise Sara. Ode to Joy is a favorite of mine.


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