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Thank you poem dedicated to Susan

She was there for me when i needed her
Quietly moving into my home
Went into  hospital as an emergency
Leaving my dog alone.

She had the  builders to contend with
Meaning bucketfuls of tea to make
Jiggling times of her own work
Thank you's she wouldnt take

Saying thats  what friends are for,
You would do it for me.
Susan stayed for 4 months
A big show of friendship, you must agree.

How do I say Thank You
To someone who has a big heart
Who just took over my home
How on earth do I start.

The usual  flowers and chocolates
Though nice, wouldn't cause a stir
Then I thought I will write a poem
Dedicated to her

So here we are Susan
This poem is for you
Thank  you for being there for me
Tilly says "Thank you" too.






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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 11:35:00 AM

    A very belated congratulations in Patricia's "Thank-You" contest Seren. Love, Carol

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/29/2012 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey thank you Carol, never to late to leave a comment.....Seren
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Seren. Congratulations with your "THANK YOU" poem,, very touching... Take care :-) ~PD

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/19/2012 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks PD I do appreciate you calling by...Seren
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 9:53:00 AM

    CONGRATS SEREN ON A MAJESTIC WRITE AND WIN LUV .. ALSO CONGRATS ON FIRST PLACE IN HUMOR ME BY FRANCINE ..NICE ..

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/19/2012 1:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda havent i been lucky ...Seren
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 4:04:00 AM

    Very sweet poem! Congratulations!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/18/2012 4:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rebecca .....Seren
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 12:17:00 AM

    beautifully penned piece Seren, congrats on your win

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/18/2012 4:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Francine ...Seren
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 6:27:00 PM

    Simple and heart-felt poem to a friend, Seren...very inspiring!...Congratulations - Tim

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/17/2012 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Tim.
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 12:51:00 PM

    this is a very sweet thank you to your friend. Congrats on your win!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/18/2012 4:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Susan only saw it yesterday, when I told her it gained 2nd place... we both had a cry...Thanks for the congrats Andrea ....Seren
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 11:56:00 AM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/18/2012 4:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Debbie for your congratulations ....Seren
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 11:18:00 AM

    congratulations on your win Seren..

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/17/2012 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you yasmin
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 8:47:00 AM

    Congrats Seren.... what a heartwarming way to appreciate friendship.... xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/18/2012 4:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Chuma , Susan loved the poem ....Seren
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 8:31:00 AM

    Beautiful words these! Friendship that comes from within is a friendship that lasts forever. Congrats on your win Seren!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/18/2012 4:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Vicky, I agree true friendship is fantastic....Seren
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:59:00 AM

    Thank you Patricia for the placement. I showed it to Susan and we both cried. Will make a watermark of her pic on a sheet of paper and print the poem on top.

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:42:00 AM

    Big Congratulations Seren and I am sure she will love it xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/18/2012 4:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy, I am sure she will ....Seren
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:08:00 AM

    What a nice way to say thank you, so much better than hallmark.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/18/2012 4:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Deeana , Susan loved it...Seren
  1. Date: 11/3/2012 5:00:00 AM

    susan will be honoured i'm sure, this is a lovely poem...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/18/2012 4:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Harry, Susan loved the poem, was very emotional....Seren