SUN and MOON by Debbie Duncan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2013 1:42:00 PM

gosh, you are VERY good at the romantic poem genre. I love this one. A fave!

Debbie Duncan Date: 1/11/2013 6:11:00 PM

Thank you Andrea ;}

Anne Currin

Date: 12/19/2012 11:42:00 AM

Your poetry is so beautiful Debbie, I love this one as much as the last :)

Debbie Duncan Date: 12/19/2012 12:33:00 PM

Thank you Anne,,,it was spur of the moment ;}

chipepo lwele

Date: 12/6/2012 4:54:00 AM

I LOVE IT ,KEEP IT UP.

Date: 11/13/2012 4:26:00 PM

Your "spur of the moment" words cast a spell reading the message in this. Has a feeling of angst and acceptance that leaves me feeling sad.

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/13/2012 5:39:00 PM

Thanks for reading Liz ;} yes it is a bit sad, wanting more, I've been single about 6 yrs now. Before that We were together 17 years.

SKAT Aces-

Date: 11/11/2012 5:04:00 PM

A very nice combination' hopefuly one can open their eyes, to everything that resides on the side of them. A very tasteful but sad poem. Have a nice day.~SKAT~

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/11/2012 5:35:00 PM

Thank ya SKAT ,,,, this is made up spur of the moment poem,, as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} I wise you a blessed day ;}

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2012 4:11:00 PM

Can it be more gorgeous .... Debbie, so glad I got to read this poem today, thank you! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/9/2012 5:46:00 PM

Oh thank you Anne - Lise ,,, spur of the moment poem,, as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} I wise you a blessed day ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/5/2012 6:39:00 PM

Hello Debbie, wow...fading into each other... Now this is a verse I'd love to take notion with my fiance... when life faded in different directions... enjoyed..pd

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/6/2012 3:46:00 AM

Hey Poet,,,,, thank you for always reading my words,,,, I wrote this on the spree of the moment as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} you have an awesome day .

Maria Paz Samelo

Date: 11/5/2012 7:40:00 AM

lovely poem friend Debbie..i like it. thanks fro sharing :)

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/5/2012 10:13:00 AM

Well thank you Maria,,,,, I wrote it on spree of the moment, as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} you have an awesome !

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 11/4/2012 5:06:00 PM

‡ A Flowing Heart's River In Glitterings Rubic Tides Of Love, Sweet Beautiful Debbie. Tis Somewhat Difficult To Imagine Such A Beautiful Lady And Spirit Ever Experiencing Anything Less Than Complete Adoration And Love. Beautiful In Blue Skies And Gray Tides Touching Poe. Through And Through And Thank You For Your Kind Sweet Visit. I Am Going To Favour This Bittersweet Beauty. Sweet Kisses, Always, Rachel *

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/4/2012 6:47:00 PM

Thank you Rachel,,,, 4 favoring my words,,,, sweet hugs and kiss back to you ;}

Bhavna khemlani

Date: 11/2/2012 11:57:00 PM

Hello Debbie, A nice one, some emotions are surely inexpressive and beyond our understanding. I like this.

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/4/2012 4:10:00 PM

Thank Bhavna,,,, it was a spree of the moment write as I heard the words " sun and moon in my head. you have an awesome day " OK' ;}

Robert Pettit

Date: 11/2/2012 10:54:00 PM

Nice imaginative write. Those two proximal heavenly bodies have inspired many great writes through the ages. This is one more for that very long list.

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/2/2012 11:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Robert,,,, a complement like tat from you is awesome. Because I know "you" are a very good writer ;}

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SUN and MOON

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