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Below is the poem entitled SUN and MOON which was written by poet Debbie Duncan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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If you were the sun 
And I were the moon 
I'd lay here silently
Fade into you
I guess I wanted you more
Then what your heart could bare
You always said if I was by your side
You could climb the highest mountain
Streaking sunsets across the sky
Painting rainbows across my heart
You said there was beauty in my laugh
As true beauty came from my kindness
You are a dream inside of a dream
You are whispers on the wind to my heart 
Can you not find your way back to me 
I guess the road of us was too long 
For your heart to understand 

10 25  2012   Wednesday   9pm

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  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:51:00 PM

    Hi Debbie, Wonderful write expressing love found and love lost... Ken..

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 1:42:00 PM

    gosh, you are VERY good at the romantic poem genre. I love this one. A fave!

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Your poetry is so beautiful Debbie, I love this one as much as the last :)

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  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:26:00 PM

    Your "spur of the moment" words cast a spell reading the message in this. Has a feeling of angst and acceptance that leaves me feeling sad.

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:04:00 PM

    A very nice combination' hopefuly one can open their eyes, to everything that resides on the side of them. A very tasteful but sad poem. Have a nice day.~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 4:11:00 PM

    Can it be more gorgeous .... Debbie, so glad I got to read this poem today, thank you! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 6:39:00 PM

    Hello Debbie, wow...fading into each other... Now this is a verse I'd love to take notion with my fiance... when life faded in different directions... enjoyed..pd

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:40:00 AM

    lovely poem friend Debbie..i like it. thanks fro sharing :)

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 11:57:00 PM

    Hello Debbie, A nice one, some emotions are surely inexpressive and beyond our understanding. I like this.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 10:54:00 PM

    Nice imaginative write. Those two proximal heavenly bodies have inspired many great writes through the ages. This is one more for that very long list.