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SUN and MOON

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SUN and MOON

If you were the sun 
And I were the moon 
I'd lay here silently
Fade into you
I guess I wanted you more
Then what your heart could bare
You always said if I was by your side
You could climb the highest mountain
Streaking sunsets across the sky
Painting rainbows across my heart
You said there was beauty in my laugh
As true beauty came from my kindness
You are a dream inside of a dream
You are whispers on the wind to my heart 
Can you not find your way back to me 
I guess the road of us was too long 
For your heart to understand 


10 25  2012   Wednesday   9pm

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  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:51:00 PM
    Hi Debbie, Wonderful write expressing love found and love lost... Ken..

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/1/2013 12:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ken ;}
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 1:42:00 PM
    gosh, you are VERY good at the romantic poem genre. I love this one. A fave!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/11/2013 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea ;}
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 11:42:00 AM
    Your poetry is so beautiful Debbie, I love this one as much as the last :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/19/2012 12:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne,,,it was spur of the moment ;}
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 4:54:00 AM
    I LOVE IT ,KEEP IT UP.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:26:00 PM
    Your "spur of the moment" words cast a spell reading the message in this. Has a feeling of angst and acceptance that leaves me feeling sad.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/13/2012 5:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading Liz ;} yes it is a bit sad, wanting more, I've been single about 6 yrs now. Before that We were together 17 years.
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:04:00 PM
    A very nice combination' hopefuly one can open their eyes, to everything that resides on the side of them. A very tasteful but sad poem. Have a nice day.~SKAT~

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/11/2012 5:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank ya SKAT ,,,, this is made up spur of the moment poem,, as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} I wise you a blessed day ;}
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 4:11:00 PM
    Can it be more gorgeous .... Debbie, so glad I got to read this poem today, thank you! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/9/2012 5:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh thank you Anne - Lise ,,, spur of the moment poem,, as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} I wise you a blessed day ;}
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 6:39:00 PM
    Hello Debbie, wow...fading into each other... Now this is a verse I'd love to take notion with my fiance... when life faded in different directions... enjoyed..pd

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/6/2012 3:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Poet,,,,, thank you for always reading my words,,,, I wrote this on the spree of the moment as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} you have an awesome day .
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:40:00 AM
    lovely poem friend Debbie..i like it. thanks fro sharing :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/5/2012 10:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well thank you Maria,,,,, I wrote it on spree of the moment, as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} you have an awesome !
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 11:57:00 PM
    Hello Debbie, A nice one, some emotions are surely inexpressive and beyond our understanding. I like this.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/4/2012 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank Bhavna,,,, it was a spree of the moment write as I heard the words " sun and moon in my head. you have an awesome day " OK' ;}
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 10:54:00 PM
    Nice imaginative write. Those two proximal heavenly bodies have inspired many great writes through the ages. This is one more for that very long list.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/2/2012 11:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Robert,,,, a complement like tat from you is awesome. Because I know "you" are a very good writer ;}