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  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:07:00 AM
    Christine there was more imagery in there than my mind could comprehend, until I saw that the Requiem was intertwined. That helped. By the way I borrowed your line "to upturned eyes" I loved it, and added a verse to my poem "Religion". Hope you don't mind Write on

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 4:15:00 PM
    very evocative write [as to what I was trying to do with..Take That..was write as arousing a write as Chris had, I think his was way more so LOL since perhaps he was writing to a specific person and I was only scanning back through time ;)]Light & Love

    Ueri Avatar Christine Ueri
    Date: 11/7/2012 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nice try...keep trying...