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Sleepless in Whereis Part 2

 Continued from Part 1 
The forgery of multitudes between the silhouettes, (And discarded cigarettes, neath the haunted parapets) Mock my lonely echoed steps - mock my lonely echoed steps (Struck like clicking castanets- struck like clicking castanets ) As I lace unlabeled lanes, erasing silence’ sullen treason. The mossy stones befuddle me, in winding rue rosettes, (Lost within the oubliettes, and in vials of anisette) Midst the mazy minuets, and the purling pirouettes Of the fugitive Grisettes (flaunting charms and amulets) Who, in flitting shades of arching bridges, linger longer, teasin’. Along the When I’m drifting, just a stardust castaway, Weaving, threading by cafés and deserted cabarets, Just a gauzy appliqué on the river’s crippled spray, Chasing Fools along the way through the strands of yesterday, Neath the throbbing peal of sobbing bells of spectral cloisters quaking. In belfries, high and haughty, alabaster knights perform, Riding stiff against a storm, steeped in clouds of chloroform, While the raven skies deform and my shrivelled shovelled form (Watching bats in steeples swarm close to candles waxing warm) Hides in hallowed hallways, hanging, shoulders weary, weak and shaking. Above me hover grinning masks and visages of Queens Spewing fatal final scenes (against a scarlet sky they lean, Dreary dripping guillotines) of demented doomed Dauphines, Traced in opalescent ballrooms only tattered time remembers. The hidden hands of Harlequins (while floating free, unseen, Behind abandoned shuttered screens, inside of shrouded Halloweens) Tap (on tumbrel tambourines) a dirge (with tattooed tones pristine) For me (a heap in ragged jeans within this crazy cluttered scheme), Trapped interred in toppled stone chateaus that dismal dawn dismembers. Rogue breezes pierce, benumbing me, I feel my fingers freezin’ (In the cockcrow’s purple season) though within, no rhyme or reason, Caught impaled upon the jagged edge of early morning’s breaking. The chill evoking silver chimes of Nodomain start knelling As the searing sun looms swelling, and their melodies hang dwelling In the cloud drifts’ care, revelling, but the Sandman’s too compelling And my weariness impelling - though my eyelids risk rebelling, Where I’ll fall, there’s no foretelling for the starry sky’s past telling, As I fade beneath the flaming forge while embers tremble, waking.
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  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:13:00 PM

    Raven skies!? That whole line was freaking awesome...no this entire poem was spectacular. Took my breath away. What a write! I am impressed and awed by this! :3 Absolutely love the ending with the trembling embers, and you (or the narrator) waking up. Looooove this. ^^ Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 5:16:00 PM

    a serious body of enchanting work, teary... dizzy magic of a long, exceptional dream.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 6:46:00 AM

    Dear Terry, through the most mysterious of your corridors yet, I'm out of the maze and back to the daily grind. Thanks for you comment. I've been in a life slump these days (no reason), so, instead of writing about it, I'm brooding. love you, Kathy

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 2:21:00 PM

    just love this, my friend

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 4:32:00 AM

    ‡ Good Morning, Sweet Beautiful Terry. Just Returning To Say Thank You Sooo Much For Your Wonderful Com And Visit. Your Words Stirred Deeply, Within Beautiful. Sweet Kisses To You, Dipped In Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 4:28:00 PM

    Wow, what a complex and riveting poem. I am awestruck at how you compose such masterpieces.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:57:00 PM

    helloanyone?

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 7:44:00 AM

    ‡ I Am Not Certain If I Have Afore Favoured Your Gifted Beauty As In A Favourite Poet Yet I Would Seem Greatly Amiss In Not Doing So Although I Am Sure I Have, Yet, Just In Case I Shall Again, Sweet Beautiful Terry. Have A Beautiful Day. My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 7:09:00 AM

    † Your Beauty's Master'y In Vast Extensive Terms Is Highly Admirable And Much To Be Sought By Any And All Whom Embrace Literature And Or Verse Amid Their Lives, Sweet Beautiful Terry O'Leary. I Would Say That This Deeply Profound And Somewhat Hauntingly Magnificent Rhyme In Splendours Poe, Would Take Quite A Few Readings To Delve Deeper Into The Many Hidden Treasures We May Say Extracting, What One Might Find ? Myself, I've Got This Incurable Mind#et In Re Divinities Stars. My Love, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 6:41:00 AM

    Oh my goodness now is this amazing or what. Yes it is Terry. What a post. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 5:36:00 AM

    i talk of dreams, and you are sleepless, maybe day dreaming, anyhow, i enjoyed this journey of yours, even with my own imaginnation, working overtime....