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Disturbance at dinnertime

she sails
into the restaurant
with her volume, voice and vibes
 
her huge waves
disturbing every conversation
 
her loud laughs
Interfering with existing atmosphere
 
her empty words
bouncing all over the room
 
her massive  presence
sharks the whole place
 
at last
she sails
out of  the harbor
that wasn’t hers
 
fresh wind blows
and everyone shows
it is  now our happy hour

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 2012

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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 5:22:00 AM

    AWESOME! Gorgeous personification! Thank you for your wonderful comment on my Poem.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:43:00 AM

    Very well written! It's just annoying when you have your quiet moment intruded on. You've brought it out so well. Keep penning the good work!

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/3/2012 1:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Vicky, you felt how disturbing it was by reading my words........... glad you 'saw' the poetic picture I made it with y o u r o w n eyes!!!!!!!!!!! Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 4:53:00 PM

    very descriptive passage in a few words. I've experienced those happy hours quite a few times, after a new wind blew in;)

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/3/2012 1:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY and I am very pleased you enjoyed reading this one. Glad to read that you had a few - more or less the same - happy hours too! Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 6:21:00 AM

    Amazing poetry you have shared with us Ellie as always. I have enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back Monday to read more. I wish you a wonderful weekend full of sunshine and inspiration. Love, Carol

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/2/2012 6:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Carol. It is so nice to know that people - YOU - are enoying my work. Have a great weekend too! Ellie daphne