Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 
About This Poem

Donald Trump

Mega billionaire Donald Trump
Seems to be everything but a chump
His haircut could have been a bit nicer
That would make him look alot wiser


A.Ertsland
November 1st 2012


Please Login to post a comment
Next>|Last
 
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 3:14:00 AM

    I like this little poem of yours,,,, thank you for reading my "secret garden" ;}

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 2:16:00 PM

    Funny lol.... Very good poem,love it!! Hugs - Laila ;o)

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 5:24:00 AM

    It's nice to read this awesome Clerihew again for the second time Arild! As I've said, it's perfect! Thank you so much for stopping and your very nice comments on my winning Haiku. Million thanks and wow! You've already been to Hua Hin, an 8 hours (i think) drive from central BKK (where I am). I've been there once, too! So hope you come and visit again with your family. Have a wonderful day!

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 9:31:00 AM

    ha ha you had me chuckling with this one. Yes his hair cut could be nicer and he needs to find a new stylist.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 4:02:00 PM

    lol lol Very good my brother across the sea... all is well back here after Sandy and then a surprise snowstorm. wow God must be angry at someone..lol... Hope your well and do appreciate the thoughts... Michael

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:11:00 PM

    He's but a chump and I'd give him a thump right in the rump because I'm a grump. Terrible aren't I Arild, couldn't help it! :)

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 10:30:00 AM

    Hehe Arild, I think he might just welcome a little bit of input with his hair do lol hope you are doing good my friend. It is almost the weekend again ;) love & hugs CTC

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 7:45:00 AM

    Yes, that hair is something!! So nice to hear from you Arild-- thank you so much for passing by and how lovely that you are familiar with house blessings from our tradition-- I didn't realize that not all do that. Thank you again and happy to post that poem and share the tradition. Enjoy your week and hugs to all of you!

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 9:38:00 AM

    CUTE ONE ARILD BUT ALSO TRUE AS WELL LUV .. HE IS A-OK .. NICE CLERIHEW TOO .. STILL HAVING LOTS OF TROUBLE COMMENTING TO POETS LUV .. TOOK AT LEAST 6 TRIES TO GET YOUR LIST OF POEMS TO APPEAR.TPS KNOWS BUT SEEMS TO HAVE NO SOLUTION CEPT BLAME ON UPGRADES .. THOUGHT UPGRADES MADE SITE BETTER ..NOT WORSE ..OH ..

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:20:00 AM

    Funny and clever!

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 11:32:00 PM

    Niiiiiice! It's been a while since I have read some of your work!! I apologize for that! This brought a smile to my face. Thanks. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 5:10:00 PM

    mr. donald. go check my new blog re personality test and see how you fared!.. sweet day to you!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 6:36:00 PM

    lol...that famous, not so stylish hair of his has become famous in jokes.... cute poem!

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 2:43:00 PM

    lol, witty write, my friend

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 12:34:00 PM

    Good Clerihew..Interesting subject for the work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..I was not in an area that was badly effected by the hurricane..We had some really bad clouds one day, several days of winds but no rain..We had lots of leaves blown off the trees and plants early but no limbs down or any damage...I was hoping that we would get rain out of the storm but no rain..It has not rained here in about 6or8 weeks...Sara

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:41:00 AM

    what next, arild?... missing your pen; the best of sunday to you!..:) huggs

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/4/2012 11:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    umm..don`t know yet! huggs back at ya`:-)
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:10:00 AM

    :DDDD

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/4/2012 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-------)))))
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 5:44:00 AM

    Funny stuff here. Thank for the chuckle today.

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/4/2012 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by,Jon! appreciate lots:)
  1. Date: 11/3/2012 5:17:00 PM

    If we could thumphis rump it might be easier to wear his hair. ho ho, I justspled your great rhyme Arild, let'sforget this part and just enjoy what you wrote. Love, Lizzie

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/3/2012 5:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    no worries,Lizzie! thanks for stopping by,missed you lately:)
    wesley Avatar elizabeth wesley Date: 11/3/2012 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I just spoiled your great rhyme (My keyboard sticks sometimes)
  1. Date: 11/3/2012 5:06:00 PM

    still can't get over donald's hair, arild, lol... did you notice the color too?.. enjoy your sunday!..:) hugggs

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/3/2012 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol..looks like a sandstorm!:-)
  1. Date: 11/3/2012 10:32:00 AM

    This is an outstanding Clerihew, Arild with perfect/precise rhymes and length. You nailed it! Great job my dear friend! I really enjoyed reading it! Thank you so much for stopping by and your inspiring comments. Have a wonderful and grace-filled day to you and your family my dear friend! All the best! love/hugs: Leonora

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/3/2012 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by Leonora! love your comments:-)
  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:23:00 AM

    nothing could make him wiser, not even a decent haircut. hahaha. Sorry, i really don't like this guy at all, but you did a great clerihew.

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/3/2012 5:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by Andrea! he should sue his hairdresser..hahaha:)
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 8:24:00 PM

    love it!! great job.how you been? hope all is well.. have a great night cory

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/3/2012 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    doing great cory!:-)
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 4:10:00 PM

    Arild, excellent clerihew, although i must be honest, if i had his money, i may grew some hair...sorry a bauld joke..

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/3/2012 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL!:-)
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 12:26:00 PM

    Hi Arild can't disagree with that statement my friend, great clerihew, have a great weekend my friend,all the best Owen

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/3/2012 5:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by my friend Owen! appreciate lots!:)
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 12:00:00 PM

    hahaha, arild... i can't see why he wears that kind of hairstyle.. are you his fashion consultant?.. jkidding.. enjoyed this to the hilt.. happy after-halloween!..:) huggs

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/3/2012 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    he nicked it from a barbie doll!:-)
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 2:33:00 AM

    Hiya I agree with pd on this one Arild. well done xx

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/3/2012 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hiya Mandy! xx
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 8:33:00 PM

    Great! Very funny, Arild!

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/3/2012 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) Donald rocks!
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 8:11:00 PM

    yea for Trump

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/3/2012 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Trump yea!!:-)
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:42:00 PM

    An excellent piece you have shared with us Arild. I have enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/3/2012 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for stopping by,Carol! appreciate lots:)
Next>|Last