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  1. Date: 11/1/2012 9:13:00 PM

    this was pretty good, nice imagery. if you want to make poetry a hobby you should go to the "forms " section and read about some of the more commonly used forms. Then get brave and try to write in some of the forms listed, Whenever you write from your heart its poetry, so keep writing.

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:45:00 PM

    An excellent piece you have shared with us Mckenzie. I have enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:44:00 PM

    Mckenzie, Your poem is good. I would have liked to read at least another stanza or two. There are so many things one can say about Christmas presents under the tree. Look at the'forms of poetry' listed under the 'Resources' on the left side of page. There you will find descriptions as how to categorize your poetry. Good luck;)