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SIMPLY ME

Just a speck I the universe
I feel it is a must
To try to do much better,
And become a particle of dust.

If I could graduate to that
I would like to see
If I could at least attain
The status of a flea.

Maybe someday per chance
If I could get it right,
I would become a shining star
You look up to every night.

But if I could reach my highest goal
How perfect it would be,
To have a second chance
At Simply being me.


Lynn Barany

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  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:44:00 PM

    Always be yourself, always do your own goals - well written lynn. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hanna Barany Avatar lynn Hanna Barany Date: 11/3/2012 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne, much appreciated. You have a great w/e as well. Lynn B
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 5:07:00 PM

    An excellent piece you have shared with us Lynn. I have enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 11:40:00 AM

    I think your doin just fine the first time, nicely done lynn, blessings Carl

    Hanna Barany Avatar lynn Hanna Barany Date: 11/1/2012 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What a lovely compliment Carl, thank you so much for taking the time to post a comment. Have a wonderful day. Lynn Barany