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Morning Rush

Morning Shift!
I hear my heart beats
thump!thump!thump!
like running under the sun's heats.
I feel my sweat carress my cheeks
down, down, through my sleeves
Morning Rush!

12/10/21

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  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:20:00 AM

    We are always rushing in the morning, aren't we? Good write, Charmane. One can see the urgency in your write. Love ya, Toquyen

    Harrell Avatar Toquyen Harrell Date: 11/7/2012 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Read it the second time. Love it. Love ya, Toquyen
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 11:15:00 AM

    We are in such a hurry, aren't we? Charming, Charmane. Love ya, Toquyen

    bellen Avatar charmane bellen Date: 11/7/2012 2:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yeah such a hurry!specially going to work in a 6am shift..makes my nerves goes up!..by the way thanks for reading..hope you'll like my poems..always>>charmane