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Silver Lining




grey clouds gather...
with a clap of thunder,
bestow their pearls of bounty
on my thirsty parched land.
A dancing heart rejoices.




1st Nov 2012
For Gogyoka contest by Joann Grisetti

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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:52:00 PM

    Yesha, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:05:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win Yesha xx

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 4:02:00 PM

    Splendid!Wonderful piece,Joann.Congratulations on your super win in this contest....

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:18:00 PM

    Beautifully done Yesha, Congrats on your well deserved first in Joann’s contest!

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 10:57:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 5:47:00 AM

    Thnx Yesh, well desereved 1st place win..A big congrats:) Jag

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 11:12:00 PM

    congratulations on a wonderful first place win dear Yesha..

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 9:52:00 PM

    This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Yesha.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 5:24:00 PM

    congratulations. a lovely poem.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 4:15:00 PM

    how lovely, pearls of bounty!!! Congrats on your win with this beauty

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 12:23:00 PM

    you captured the theme with such grace and agility, yesh... love this!..:) hugs

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 8:12:00 AM

    wow you did wonderful. So strange how YOU are longing for rain and the US east coast is hating it. Life is very strange indeed.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 6:59:00 AM

    Rather heavy rains here now, nice write on rains, thnx for the visit, good luck!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 1:15:00 PM

    Yesha, this will probably be high up on the winners list - Beautiful!! Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 8:30:00 AM

    Reads like a winner..Great lines penned..We need that rain here for we are really dry..It is predicted in the next few days..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 7:23:00 AM

    baeutiful verse!Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 7:12:00 AM

    Here too!!:)