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A Mother's Crossroad

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A Mother's Crossroad

"A Mother's Crossroad" staring at the tiny white casket tears cascading as raindrops fell sorrow surrounds my heart holding blue basket with his favorite toys crying with toll of funeral bell. though grief usurped my saddened soul mourning a loss precious and dear one memorable moment in time made whole for a Mother's crossroad was drawin g near. emotions swallowed my life that fateful day no purpose seemed clear to live or exist searching for answers; uttered words to pray breathing had vanished inside Death's Mist. should I fade into the Past? should I retrieve from pain? should I deny my family, at last, to cease to be? what would I gain? to bury a child hurts so very deep yet change always makes Life turn as the human heart avows to weep for forging forward was my concern. a Mother's crossroad healed within while memories lingered of a sweet son who gave me strength to seek to win choosing a path toward a golden Sun. *For Gail Angel Doyle's Standing At A Crossroads Contest. *Written by: Linda-Marie The "Sweetheart" of P.S. *Oct. 31, 2012.

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 3:13:00 AM
    amazing poem, and win.... beautiful ending... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 11:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Gail's "Standing At A Crossroad" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 10:40:00 AM
    Good Morning Linda my bff.... another wonderful win... Congrats in Gail's contest..pd

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:23:00 AM
    congrats on your win Linda

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 3:54:00 AM
    This is so sad Linda and very emotional. Congrats on your win xx

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 2:16:00 AM
    Linda I am overwhelmed with emotion reading your lovely poem.... Seren

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:19:00 PM
    A crossroad no parent wants to find themselves at. Very emotional moving Poem. Congratulations on win.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 10:03:00 PM
    Big congratulations on your grand win friend Linda-Marie. I have mixed emotions while reading your poem...its beautifully sad...big hug from me.....and thanks for your nice comments on my poem. Have a blessed day always.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 9:47:00 PM
    Congrats Linda on your super win, enjoyed, vie

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 9:37:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:42:00 PM
    WON 1ST PLACE .. THANKXX.

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Reading your poems about J.J. always touch me deeply-- I can only imagine the grief that tore through you...your love for him is evident in your writes, Linda. I find mothers like you who have lost their children so strong. I hope you and Ron and the rest of your family continue to be safe... I can imagine how Sandy was in your area...hugs to you.

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 11:05:00 AM
    Mother's heart always fore gives, it's the natural real instinct of mother's heart in this world. Mother helps son and sometimes son helps mother also. Nice poem of inner depth. Good luck always. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 8:34:00 AM
    Very touching... brought a lump to my throat! Exceptional my dear Linda-Marie! Love and big hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 6:17:00 AM
    i have said it before, you give of so much of yourself, and you are always there with your wonderful comments. but more important, is your wonderful poetry such as this....

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 5:06:00 AM
    deeply scribed with touching lines that simply highlights a meaningful crossroad in your life... soulful and beautiful... winning hugggs!

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 8:24:00 PM
    Touching, emotional, heartfelt write Linda. I think you perfectly describe a mother's crossroads in your truly beautiful poem. This has got to be a winner dear.

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 7:27:00 PM
    Extremely moving. The poem has come from the heart and is bound to touch hearts. My sympathies Linda. About a year ago my surrogate son, a young man of 26, died in a road accident widowing his young pregnant wife. I have no words to describe my pain. Now his wife has a 10 months old dauhter gone after her father in appearance. I am carrying on my soul the grief of that girl. This is what life is. Thanks for your congratulatory message on my Poem Make Me Sleep. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 7:17:00 PM
    Linda.....such raw emotion had my heart aching, a heartfelt and touching write! So happy you shared this. Hugs

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 3:07:00 PM
    Linda my bff,, your poem is beautiful, and a wonderful entry for Gail's contest... , stopping by to wish you a Happy Halloween ;-).~hugs xox hugs~ Please have a happy, fun and safe Halloween. Trick or treat~ Love:-) PD

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