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You are What You Feel

Horrifying moment comes 
Wherever you feel scared

Burden appears 
Only when you feel weak

Failure takes place 
Whenever you feel can't

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 2:17:00 AM

    well... nice try...

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:38:00 PM

    Full of negative feelings that sometimes take over; reminds me to not go there! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 9:50:00 AM

    one can only feel admiration for you when reading this wonderful poem...

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 8:37:00 AM

    "Can't" has never been a word in my vocabulary! There is always a way... good write! Hugs!

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 12:49:00 PM

    I agree. Nice poem!

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 11:55:00 AM

    Great free verse,Dinda:) And how true it is what you write here! Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 11:19:00 AM

    To feel the horrors of the way to the fingertips, heart up into the throat ... It's a really bad feeling. - A well written poem Dinda, like it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 11:18:00 AM

    so true,great write Dinda