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The Fog

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The Fog

The Fog Tonight makes fifty years of the anniversary of their death They shall come back for revenge with coldness in their breath Many years ago, people in the town stole the fishermen’s gold Hid it between the walls of a church that remains centuries old When the fog rolls in, their large ship will be found drifting on the ocean’s tides Waiting to seek their retaliation to all who resides The fog will glow in the shadows of them walking through Waiting to sink their hand hooks deep within you When they arrive at your door you will hear heavy knocking sounds Sounds that will leave shivers up your spine, knowing that you are found If you refuse to let them in, the fog will roll under the door Inviting them in your room so they can finish what they came there for I tell you, beware of the fog tonight when it appears They will be lurking in the fog waiting to give us our worst nightmares Keep reminding yourself to look out for a ship at sea Their ghost ship will be resting up on the ocean stirring back at you mysteriously And whatever you do, don’t open your door to see who’s on the other side They will be there waiting with a sickle in their hands waiting for you to step outside Waiting in the shadows of the fog which glows Angrily searching for their stolen gold Happy Halloween!!!!!

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  1. Date: 11/1/2012 12:25:00 PM

    Full of mystery happy halloween. Good luck, if for contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 7:06:00 AM

    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment on my poetry Angel Gail. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:11:00 PM

    YES!!! I love it Gail! You have done tremendously with this incredibly wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious and delightful poem this afternoon! You have pleased me to no end with this one...I saw there are more here on the Soup by you for Halloween...I will read them presently! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 1:45:00 PM

    Very enjoyable and frightening. I can almost hear Rod Serling introducing another episode of "The Twilight Zone!" OOOOHHHHHHHHH-spooky

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 12:07:00 PM

    This is fabulous! Very nicely done :)

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/30/2012 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Heather, thank you for enjoying my poem The Fog. It's part of my halloween spooktacular of poems I'm posting today. Hugs, Gail