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Autumn gold



gold dust

crisp crackling charms

carpet in swishing breeze

unfurl pleasant fragrance of blooms

bright sparks.





Yesha Shah
30th Oct 2012
For: Up in the Autumn Air contest
Sponsor: Russel Sivey

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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 5:52:00 PM

    filled with such grace, yesh...congrats on your greeat spot!.:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 3:42:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work...Enjoyed reading..Sara

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 8:35:00 AM

    Congrats on your win.. :-)

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 5:56:00 AM

    congratulations on your win Yesha :) cheers!

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 10:42:00 AM

    congratulations on a wonderful write Yeshu...and a super win.

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 3:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Yesha, you have said so much with just a few words xx

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 10:08:00 PM

    CONGRATS YESHA ON A GORGEOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV ..

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 9:32:00 PM

    I see you won with flying autumn colors!!! Congrats, sweet friend.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 8:13:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 6:04:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 5:32:00 AM

    Dear Yesha ,Wonderful poem ,and I think it's a winner!!!Good luck in the contest. Hugs Anne

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 12:59:00 AM

    Hi...I really enjoyed your cinquain. You can really visualize and "hear" the noises written in the poem. You inspired me to write one. At first, I wrote a modern one. Then, I saw yours and being traditional, I decided to go that route. It was a little more challenging converting one to another. When you get a chance maybe you can stop by and let me know what you think about mine...It's called "Love Affair." Thanks!!Holly Moore

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:02:00 PM

    Excellent!!So rich in imagery in only 5 lines!!Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 1:48:00 PM

    How lovely and it really goes well with the contest theme, Yesha!

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 12:27:00 PM

    what a lovely treatment for the autumn theme, yesh... radiantly tebder.. my winnin bet!..:) huggs

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