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Autumn gold



gold dust

crisp crackling charms

carpet in swishing breeze

unfurl pleasant fragrance of blooms

bright sparks.





Yesha Shah
30th Oct 2012
For: Up in the Autumn Air contest
Sponsor: Russel Sivey

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    nette onclaud
    Date: 11/5/2012 5:52:00 PM
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    filled with such grace, yesh...congrats on your greeat spot!.:) huggs
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 11/5/2012 3:42:00 PM
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    Congrats on your winning work...Enjoyed reading..Sara
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    Hazel Connelly
    Date: 11/5/2012 8:35:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win.. :-)
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 11/5/2012 7:21:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Yesha. Love, Carol
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    Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 11/5/2012 5:56:00 AM
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    congratulations on your win Yesha :) cheers!
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 11/4/2012 10:42:00 AM
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    congratulations on a wonderful write Yeshu...and a super win.
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/4/2012 3:32:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win Yesha, you have said so much with just a few words xx
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 11/3/2012 10:08:00 PM
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    CONGRATS YESHA ON A GORGEOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/3/2012 9:32:00 PM
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    I see you won with flying autumn colors!!! Congrats, sweet friend.
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 11/3/2012 8:13:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win.
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 11/3/2012 6:04:00 PM
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    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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    Anne Rutherford
    Date: 10/31/2012 5:32:00 AM
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    Dear Yesha ,Wonderful poem ,and I think it's a winner!!!Good luck in the contest. Hugs Anne
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    HOLLY MOORE
    Date: 10/31/2012 12:59:00 AM
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    Hi...I really enjoyed your cinquain. You can really visualize and "hear" the noises written in the poem. You inspired me to write one. At first, I wrote a modern one. Then, I saw yours and being traditional, I decided to go that route. It was a little more challenging converting one to another. When you get a chance maybe you can stop by and let me know what you think about mine...It's called "Love Affair." Thanks!!Holly Moore
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    kash poet
    Date: 10/30/2012 2:02:00 PM
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    Excellent!!So rich in imagery in only 5 lines!!Best wishes to you.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/30/2012 1:48:00 PM
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    How lovely and it really goes well with the contest theme, Yesha!
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 10/30/2012 12:27:00 PM
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    what a lovely treatment for the autumn theme, yesh... radiantly tebder.. my winnin bet!..:) huggs

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud Date: 10/30/2012 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    *tender*