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Sleepwalker

Sleepwalk
where do you go in sleepwalk
with your eyes open only to the moonlight,
in this place at midnight?

Sleepwalk
why do you go there in sleepwalk
to torment your soul, place your life in harrow
in streets oh so narrow?

I need
to put right what is wrong
put right this affliction you've suffered so long,
I need
if only that to find
forever a way to free your cyclone mind.

We need
honey a place in time to talk
i have done you wrong of that i regret
please forgive and forget...

copyright Harry J Horsman 2012
to the tune of sleepwalk,
intro 15 sec

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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 2:45:00 PM

    well done in the contest mate, looking back alas alack, a man is ever lacking, situation normal,

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Sleepwalk" contest Harry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 2:24:00 PM

    Great job with a real hard task..Craig should have made us attach a song file with use singing!! Congrad's on your win SO glad to be back! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:04:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 10:18:00 AM

    its a nice poem Haryy. congratulations!! cheers!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 6:17:00 AM

    Big congratulations harry xx

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 2:17:00 AM

    I loved this from the first. BIG congrats on your well deserved win, Harry.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:57:00 AM

    CONGRATS HARRY LUV ON A MAGNIFICET SET OF LYRICS TO SLEEPWALK MELODY .. AND A FANTASTIC TOP TEN WIN TOO ,,WOW

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:41:00 AM

    It's so beautiful, Harry. Congratulations on your awesome win! hugs:)LG

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:27:00 AM

    how dreamy, harry..congrats on the win, cyn!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:10:00 AM

    Well done Harry, .....Seren

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 10:07:00 PM

    Harry, you did it proud!!

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 6:10:00 PM

    Harry, congratulations with your awesome poem in Craig's "Sleepwalk" contest :-) take care~PD

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 5:41:00 PM

    congrats on a great win Harry

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 8:08:00 AM

    Great concept... well written... very creative! Good luck, cheers, Jack

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 12:05:00 AM

    Beat+Message=Awesome poem! The idea of a 'cyclone mind' shows the urgency that is needed to combat reality and smoothen rocky parts. Lovely poem Harry! (I like that you noted the intro - that's precision).

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 7:31:00 AM

    Good luck with the contest, I like your style.

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 9:20:00 AM

    Absolutely I agree with our friend Andrea. She said my tongue's word. You are always, nice genius. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Harry, I like this one even better than the other sleepwalk poem. I think because it is more concise for me. I never listened to this sleepwalk song yet. I really need to do that before the contest disappears forever. Always feel like I have no time and Sleepwalk was a contest I had hoped to try. gosh, Harry, you can't always reply to me? What is that all about? Is it mostly with the older poems? Well, I am happy to have seen this lovely poem of yours today. luv, andrea

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 7:08:00 AM

    Hi love it and I just love that tune too, this is so good xx

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 5:23:00 AM

    Wonderful poem Harry, love Elizabeth